List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb forms and avoid repeating similar ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly. For example, instead of 'it's make it easier' say 'it makes it easier'.

Ví dụ: I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what to buy. This way, I stay focused and avoid buying unnecessary items, which also helps me stick to my budget.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs clearer structure and correct grammar. Use proper verb tenses and complete your sentences. Also, use linking words to organize your ideas logically. For example, say 'it helps me stay focused and prioritize tasks' instead of 'it help me to stay focused'.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay focused and prioritize tasks. This way, I know exactly what I need to complete today and tomorrow.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and repetitive. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating phrases. Also, use linking words to connect your points. For example, 'Some people avoid making lists because they believe they can remember everything, but this can lead to confusion about priorities.'

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can remember all their tasks. However, this approach can make it hard to focus and prioritize important activities.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. Also, use linking words to improve coherence. For example, say 'it helps me stay on track and notifies me of upcoming tasks' instead of 'it help me to keep on track and they notify me'.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it helps me stay on track and notifies me about tasks I need to do tomorrow. Additionally, it's very convenient to carry my phone everywhere.

× I usually make a list when I shop because it's make it easier for me to read and see what thing I should buy.

✓ I usually make a list when I shop because it makes it easier for me to read and see what things I should buy.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'thing' should be plural 'things' because it refers to multiple items.

× I usually make a list when I shop because it's make it easier for me to read and see what thing I should buy.

✓ I usually make a list when I shop because it makes it easier for me to read and see what things I should buy.

The noun 'thing' should be plural 'things' because the context implies multiple items to buy.

× Umm making a list and when I go shopping help me to stay focused on what thing I need to do instead of just buy random thing and it will make my budget lower.

✓ Umm, making a list and going shopping help me to stay focused on what things I need to do instead of just buying random things, and it helps lower my budget.

The phrase 'when I go shopping' should be changed to 'going shopping' to parallel 'making a list'. 'Thing' should be plural 'things' as it refers to multiple items. 'Buy' should be 'buying' to match the gerund form after 'instead of'. Also, 'it will make my budget lower' is better expressed as 'it helps lower my budget' for clarity and tense consistency.

× I usually make a list for my work and it help me to stay focused and to see what things I should done today or tomorrow or what things I should be prioritize.

✓ I usually make a list for my work and it helps me to stay focused and to see what things I should do today or tomorrow or what things I should prioritize.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'Should done' is incorrect; 'should do' is correct because 'should' is followed by the base form of the verb. 'Should be prioritize' should be 'should prioritize' for the same reason.

× And for me making a list helped me to know what I need to do instead of just.

✓ And for me, making a list helps me to know what I need to do instead of just guessing.

The past tense 'helped' is inconsistent with the present context; 'helps' is better. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'guessing' completes the thought logically.

× I think some people don't make a list because they think that they can, they can do, they can finish everything they need to do.

✓ I think some people don't make a list because they think that they can do, they can finish everything they need to do.

The repetition 'they can, they can do' is redundant; it should be simplified to 'they can do'. Also, 'can do' is the correct modal verb usage here.

× And it's a not a good way because you don't you wouldn't know what to focus on.

✓ And it's not a good way because you wouldn't know what to focus on.

The phrase 'you don't you wouldn't' is incorrect and redundant; 'you wouldn't' is the correct modal verb form to express hypothetical situation.

× For me, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it help me to keep on track and they notify me which things I need to do tomorrow and it was really convenient for me to carrying them around.

✓ For me, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it helps me to keep on track and it notifies me which things I need to do tomorrow, and it is really convenient for me to carry it around.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with singular subject 'it'. 'They notify' is incorrect because 'list' or 'phone' is singular; 'it notifies' is correct. 'It was' should be 'it is' to maintain present tense. 'To carrying' should be 'to carry' because 'to' is followed by the base verb form.