Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do it because I think make a list is very useful for me to have a shop have shopping.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need to buy this week. I can save time and avoid forgetting important items.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people don't like making lists because they find it time consuming and a bit troublesome. They prefer to go shopping freely without restrictions.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my because I can see my lists in my phones in anytime. It's very useful.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 你的回答语法不够准确,表达不够自然,句子结构混乱。建议使用完整且正确的句子表达观点,避免重复和语法错误。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and makes shopping more efficient.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 你的回答较为完整且表达清晰,但可以使用更多连接词使句子更连贯,同时丰富细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list before shopping because it helps me remember all the items I need this week. Moreover, it saves time and prevents me from forgetting important things.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且表达清楚,但可以增加连接词使句子更流畅,同时尝试使用更丰富的词汇。
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and inconvenient. Instead, they prefer shopping spontaneously without any restrictions.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题。建议注意句子结构,正确使用介词和冠词,使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can access it anytime, which is very convenient.
× Yes, I do it because I think make a list is very useful for me to have a shop have shopping.
✓ Yes, I do it because I think making a list is very useful for me when I go shopping.
句中“make a list”应使用动名词形式“making a list”作为主语。此外,“have a shop have shopping”表达不正确,应改为“when I go shopping”表示“当我去购物时”。这是单复数和动词形式的错误。
× Yes, I do it because I think make a list is very useful for me to have a shop have shopping.
✓ Yes, I do it because I think making a list is very useful for me when I go shopping.
“for me to have a shop have shopping”中的介词使用错误,正确表达应为“for me when I go shopping”,表示“对我来说,当我去购物时”。
× I prefer to make a list on my because I can see my lists in my phones in anytime.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can see my lists on my phone anytime.
“on my”缺少名词,应为“on my phone”。“in my phones in anytime”中“phones”应为单数“phone”,“in anytime”应为“anytime”,介词使用错误。
× I prefer to make a list on my because I can see my lists in my phones in anytime.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can see my lists on my phone anytime.
“in my phones in anytime”中的介词使用错误,应改为“on my phone anytime”,表示“在我的手机上随时查看”。