List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is quite long and contains many fillers such as 'umm' and 'uh', which affects the natural flow. Try to be more concise and avoid redundancy. Also, organise your ideas clearly by starting with a direct answer and then adding a reason or example. For instance, avoid repeating 'randomly' and unclear phrases like 'Choo Choo choosing'.

Ví dụ: I usually don't make a shopping list because I prefer to browse and choose items spontaneously. This suits my personality as I enjoy the freedom to decide what to buy while I'm in the store.

Gợi ý: Your answer addresses the question but contains some unclear phrases and filler words. Try to use clearer vocabulary and structure your answer with a topic sentence followed by supporting details. Also, avoid repetition and improve coherence by using linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work each day. This helps me keep track of my tasks and motivates me to complete them on time. For example, I tick off each task once it's done, which gives me a sense of progress.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid vague phrases. Use linking words to connect your points logically. Also, provide specific reasons or examples to support your opinion.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to shop or work spontaneously without restrictions. For instance, when shopping, they might enjoy choosing items based on their mood rather than a fixed plan. However, for work, many find lists helpful to stay organised.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and filler words. Try to speak more fluently and use complete sentences. Also, explain your preference clearly with reasons and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient. Since I always carry my phone, I can easily check or update my list anytime without needing paper and pen.

× For me personally, I will not make a list when I shop and I think it's because my personality that I'm not that kind of person.

✓ For me personally, I do not make a list when I shop because of my personality; I'm not that kind of person.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'will not' to describe a habitual action. In English, the simple present tense is used to express habits or routines. Therefore, 'I do not make a list' is correct. Also, 'because my personality that' is ungrammatical; it should be 'because of my personality.'

× We usually plan for it and umm, I just, we randomly, uh, go to the store and uh, search for the thing I want to buy and just randomly, uh, Choo Choo choosing it.

✓ We usually plan for it, but I just randomly go to the store and look for the things I want to buy and just randomly choose them.

The sentence has inconsistent tense and awkward phrasing. 'Search for the thing I want' should be 'look for the things I want' to match plural and natural usage. 'Choo Choo choosing it' is unclear and incorrect; 'choose them' is appropriate. Also, 'plan for it and umm, I just, we randomly' is confusing; 'but I just randomly' clarifies the contrast.

× And I wouldn't really make a plan.

✓ And I don't really make a plan.

'Wouldn't' implies conditional or hypothetical situations, but here the speaker refers to a habitual action. The simple present 'don't' is appropriate for habitual negation.

× I'm so for my work, I will make at least like the To Do List for my work, like what I have to finish that day.

✓ For my work, I make at least a To-Do List of what I have to finish that day.

'I'm so for my work' is ungrammatical and unclear; it should be omitted. 'I will make' suggests future intention, but the context is habitual action, so simple present 'I make' is correct. 'At least like the To Do List' is awkward; 'at least a To-Do List' is better.

× And when I finished it, I will put a take on next to it.

✓ And when I finish it, I put a tick next to it.

The sentence mixes past tense 'finished' with future 'will put.' Since the action is habitual, simple present tense 'finish' and 'put' should be used. Also, 'put a take' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'put a tick.'

× So if for me to follow up my current process and pushing me to, uh, finish the work on time and it allow me to, uh, like, uh, have to go every day.

✓ This helps me follow up on my current progress and pushes me to finish the work on time; it also allows me to keep going every day.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'If for me to follow up' is incorrect; it should be 'This helps me follow up.' 'Pushing me' should be 'pushes me' to agree with the subject. 'It allow me' should be 'it allows me' for subject-verb agreement. The phrase 'have to go every day' is unclear; 'keep going every day' is more natural.

× I think it depends on their target, like when they are shopping, I think less than some people that will not make the list such because they just randomly go to the store and buy something and what they interested in.

✓ I think it depends on their goal; for example, when they are shopping, some people do not make a list because they just randomly go to the store and buy things they are interested in.

The sentence has awkward phrasing and tense issues. 'Less than some people that will not make the list such' is incorrect; it should be 'some people do not make a list.' 'What they interested in' lacks the verb 'are.' The sentence is corrected for clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× And if you are talking about working, I think umm definitely people will more likely to make the list because umm uh yeah.

✓ And if you are talking about work, I think people are definitely more likely to make a list because, well, yes.

'People will more likely to make the list' is incorrect; the correct form is 'people are more likely to make a list.' 'Talking about working' is better as 'talking about work.' The sentence is adjusted for grammatical correctness and clarity.

× I would prefer to make the list on phone definitely because nowadays that rarely people will bring paper and pens out, go out and I think most people will only bring their phone.

✓ I would definitely prefer to make the list on my phone because nowadays people rarely bring paper and pens when they go out, and I think most people only bring their phone.

'On phone' should be 'on my phone.' 'That rarely people will bring' is incorrect; it should be 'people rarely bring.' 'Will only bring' is better as 'only bring' for habitual action. The sentence is corrected for natural phrasing and grammar.

× So for the convenience. So I think make the list on the phone that I can check at at any moment that umm is convenient to me.

✓ So for convenience, I think making the list on the phone is convenient because I can check it at any moment.

'So for the convenience' is incorrect; 'for convenience' is correct. 'I think make the list' should be 'I think making the list.' The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.