Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often make a list to remind me what need to buy and that I'm doing. This way I can forget the important thing.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Years As a student, I often make a list to finish my homework. That's a good way to help me to finish my homework.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because there may be things that a complex way.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because, uh, nowadays and many people use the phone conveniently.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,例如“what need to buy”和“that I'm doing”不符合英语习惯,且“can forget the important thing”表达了相反的意思。建议加强语法基础,使用更自然的表达方式,并注意句子逻辑。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a shopping list to remind myself of the items I need to buy. This helps me avoid forgetting important things.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和重复表达,如“help me to finish my homework”重复且不够简洁。建议使用更自然的句子结构,避免重复,并且明确回答问题。
Ví dụ: As a student, I often make lists to organize my homework. It helps me stay focused and complete tasks efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误,句子不通顺,无法表达清楚原因。建议学习如何用完整句子表达原因,并提供具体细节。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it complicated and time-consuming.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题,如“nowadays and many people use the phone conveniently”不符合英语习惯。建议使用更自然的表达,并补充具体原因。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily edit or add items anytime.
× Yes, I often make a list to remind me what need to buy and that I'm doing.
✓ Yes, I often make a list to remind me what I need to buy and what I'm doing.
句子中缺少主语“I”,导致动词“need”没有主语,应该加上“I”形成完整的从句。
× This way I can forget the important thing.
✓ This way I won't forget the important things.
原句表达与意思不符,应该是“不忘记重要的事情”,因此使用否定形式和复数形式更合适。
× Years As a student, I often make a list to finish my homework.
✓ As a student, I often make a list to finish my homework.
句首“Years”无意义且导致句子结构混乱,应删除。
× That's a good way to help me to finish my homework.
✓ That's a good way to help me finish my homework.
动词“help”后面不需要加“to”不定式,直接用动词原形。
× Because there may be things that a complex way.
✓ Because there may be things that are complex.
原句缺少谓语动词“are”,导致句子不完整。
× I prefer to make a list on my phone because, uh, nowadays and many people use the phone conveniently.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because, nowadays, many people use phones conveniently.
“nowadays”和“and”连接不当,应去掉“and”,并且“phone”应复数形式“phones”表示一般情况。