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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, I think it's important for me because it encourage me not to overspend while shopping. In other words, I buy things which I need and not what I want.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Of course this will ensure me from not forgetting to do important task. I feel it in the motto Plan your work, work your plan.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

I believe this is because some people get stressed when they see A to do list because they cannot handle it well. They also think it's troublesome for them.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I will make a list on my phones. It's more convenient and reliable to put my list on my phone. These days. We have reminder options to remind us about our task that needs to be complete and in this ways we can accomplish our task well.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点,但语法错误影响了表达的自然性和准确性。建议注意动词时态和单复数形式的正确使用,同时可以用更丰富的词汇替代简单词汇,使表达更地道。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me avoid overspending. By sticking to the list, I only buy what I really need instead of impulsive items.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,且表达不够连贯。建议改进句子结构,使用连接词使表达更流畅,同时注意冠词和名词的单复数形式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me remember important tasks. As the saying goes, 'Plan your work and work your plan.'

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但句子结构重复且有语法错误。建议使用多样的句型和连接词,使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they feel overwhelmed by the tasks. Additionally, they may find it inconvenient or time-consuming.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和断句不当,影响表达的连贯性。建议注意句子完整性,使用合适的连接词,并避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and reliable. Nowadays, reminder apps help me complete tasks efficiently.

Ngữ pháp

Subject-verb agreement errors

× Yes, I think it's important for me because it encourage me not to overspend while shopping.

Yes, I think it's important for me because it encourages me not to overspend while shopping.

主语是第三人称单数"it",谓语动词应加-s,变成"encourages",以符合主谓一致规则。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Of course this will ensure me from not forgetting to do important task.

Of course this will ensure that I do not forget to do important tasks.

动词ensure后应接宾语从句,不能直接接"me",且"task"应为复数"tasks",表示多个任务。

Singular and plural issue

× Of course this will ensure me from not forgetting to do important task.

Of course this will ensure that I do not forget to do important tasks.

"task"应为复数形式"tasks",因为通常有多个任务需要完成。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I feel it in the motto Plan your work, work your plan.

I believe in the motto 'Plan your work, work your plan.'

"feel it in the motto"表达不正确,应使用"believe in the motto"表示相信这句格言。

Incorrect use of articles

× I believe this is because some people get stressed when they see A to do list because they cannot handle it well.

I believe this is because some people get stressed when they see a to-do list because they cannot handle it well.

"A to do list"中"to do list"应连写为"to-do list",且前面冠词应为小写"a"。

Singular and plural issue

× I believe this is because some people get stressed when they see A to do list because they cannot handle it well.

I believe this is because some people get stressed when they see a to-do list because they cannot handle it well.

"to-do list"是单数形式,前面冠词"a"正确,保持单数。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× They also think it's troublesome for them.

They also think it's troublesome for them.

该句无语法错误,保持原句。

Singular and plural issue

× I will make a list on my phones.

I will make a list on my phone.

"phone"应为单数形式,因为通常指一个设备。

Sentence structure errors

× It's more convenient and reliable to put my list on my phone.

It's more convenient and reliable to keep my list on my phone.

"put my list on my phone"表达不自然,改为"keep my list on my phone"更符合习惯用法。

Sentence structure errors

× These days. We have reminder options to remind us about our task that needs to be complete and in this ways we can accomplish our task well.

These days, we have reminder options to remind us about our tasks that need to be completed, and in this way we can accomplish our tasks well.

句子断句错误,应将"These days."改为"These days,"。"task"应为复数"tasks","needs"改为"need"以符合复数主语,"complete"改为过去分词"completed","ways"改为单数"way"以匹配前文。

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