Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list when I going shopping to to to to show I want to buy and don't and don't buy over.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, sure. Because in the group, because at work I have a list. I have a list for my work to to, to every, to everything I need, to everything job I need.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because this because because making this have many times and some people quite lazy and and and they to do something when they like and they.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I I prefer make a list on my phone because I take my phone every time everywhere and my friend have function function notification yes and say so comfortable.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự tự nhiên và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh lặp từ không cần thiết.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping to remember what I want to buy and avoid buying unnecessary items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến người nghe khó hiểu. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ ràng hơn về cách danh sách giúp bạn trong công việc.
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize all the tasks I need to complete efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, khiến ý nghĩa bị mơ hồ. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích rõ lý do tại sao một số người không thích làm danh sách.
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to do things spontaneously.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng tốt nhưng bị lặp từ và lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời rõ ràng, sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và giải thích cụ thể hơn về lợi ích của việc dùng điện thoại để làm danh sách.
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, and the notification feature helps me remember tasks easily.
× Yes, I usually make a list when I going shopping to to to to show I want to buy and don't and don't buy over.
✓ Yes, I usually make a list when I am going shopping to show what I want to buy and not buy too much.
The phrase 'I going shopping' is incorrect because after 'when I' a verb in the present participle form with the auxiliary verb 'am' is needed, so it should be 'I am going shopping'. Also, the sentence has repeated words and unclear phrases which have been corrected for clarity.
× Yes, sure. Because in the group, because at work I have a list. I have a list for my work to to, to every, to everything I need, to everything job I need.
✓ Yes, sure. Because at work, I have a list. I have a list for my work for everything I need to do.
The original sentence has repeated words and unclear structure. The phrase 'to to, to every, to everything I need, to everything job I need' is incorrect and confusing. It should be simplified to 'for everything I need to do' to express the intended meaning clearly.
× Because this because because making this have many times and some people quite lazy and and and they to do something when they like and they.
✓ Because making lists takes time and some people are quite lazy and only do things when they feel like it.
The original sentence is fragmented and contains repeated words, making it difficult to understand. The corrected sentence restructures the idea clearly and grammatically, using proper verb forms and conjunctions.
× I I prefer make a list on my phone because I take my phone every time everywhere and my friend have function function notification yes and say so comfortable.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I take my phone everywhere, and it has a notification function which is very convenient.
The phrase 'prefer make' is incorrect; after 'prefer' the infinitive form 'to make' should be used. Also, 'my friend have function function notification' is unclear and likely a misstatement; it should be 'it has a notification function'. The sentence is corrected for grammar and clarity.