List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Hãy tránh lặp từ và sử dụng câu đơn giản, tự nhiên. Bạn nên bắt đầu bằng câu chủ đề trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sau đó giải thích thêm với các chi tiết cụ thể và liên kết hợp lý.

Ví dụ: I sometimes make a shopping list, especially when I have many items to buy. This helps me remember everything and shop more efficiently.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh nói lắp và câu không rõ nghĩa. Hãy giải thích rõ ràng lý do và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: I don't usually make a work list because I prefer to work spontaneously. I find that planning too strictly doesn't suit my style.

Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng cấu trúc câu chính xác hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy dùng từ nối để câu trả lời trôi chảy và cung cấp ví dụ hoặc lý do cụ thể hơn.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously. For example, they enjoy flexibility and don't like to be restricted by plans.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và hoàn chỉnh hơn. Tránh lặp từ và nói không rõ ý. Hãy giải thích lý do cụ thể và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, mạch lạc.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because writing by hand helps me remember better. Also, I can stick the list on my desk for easy reference.

× I would say it depend on my shopping list cause in this time it could.

✓ I would say it depends on my shopping list because this time it could.

The verb 'depend' should be in the third person singular form 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, 'cause' is informal; 'because' is more appropriate in this context.

× I could use my own brain to memorize memorize but when is contain a long and long list I could note it down and then buy due to that note.

✓ I could use my own brain to memorize, but when it contains a long list, I could note it down and then buy according to that note.

The sentence has incorrect conjunction use and missing subject 'it' before 'contains'. Also, 'contain' should be 'contains' to agree with singular subject 'it'. Repetition of 'memorize' is unnecessary.

× Before I used to not think my work for a day, but right now I'm not using it at all 'cause it doesn't work for myself because like, I'm not the following person.

✓ Before, I didn't use to plan my work for the day, but right now I'm not using it at all because it doesn't work for me since I'm not the type of person who follows plans.

The phrase 'used to not think' is incorrect; 'didn't use to' is the correct past tense negative form. 'For myself' should be 'for me'. 'Following person' is unclear; 'type of person who follows plans' is clearer.

× So I like to spend, uh, spend studying by myself 'cause in this time I want to do this, I will do that and another time I want.

✓ So I like to spend time studying by myself because if I want to do this, I will do that, and at another time, I want to do something else.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks clarity. 'Spend, uh, spend studying' is redundant; 'spend time studying' is correct. The conjunctions and sentence structure need improvement for clarity.

× From my point of view, I think that they are not the type of person who like to follow the plan and because they are the person who love study or work spontaneously, so they would rather doing whatever they want than just consent.

✓ From my point of view, I think that they are not the type of people who like to follow a plan because they are the kind of people who love to study or work spontaneously, so they would rather do whatever they want than just consent.

'Person' should be plural 'people' to match 'they'. 'Like' should be 'like' for plural subject. 'Love study' should be 'love to study'. 'Would rather doing' should be 'would rather do'. 'Consent' is incorrect here; possibly 'consent' should be replaced with 'follow a plan' or similar.

× I would choose making these on my paper rather than phone 'cause on paper I can memorize it combined with write writing down and also like if I'm writing on paper I can stick and my table on the on the.

✓ I would choose to make these on paper rather than on my phone because on paper I can memorize it combined with writing it down, and also, if I'm writing on paper, I can stick it on my table.

'Making these on my paper' should be 'to make these on paper'. 'Rather than phone' should be 'rather than on my phone'. 'Combined with write writing down' is incorrect; 'combined with writing it down' is correct. The last part is incomplete and unclear; corrected to 'stick it on my table'.