List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá đầy đủ nhưng có một số lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng chưa chính xác, ví dụ như 'It save times' nên là 'It saves time' và 'reduces trust' có thể là lỗi đánh máy, nên sửa thành 'reduces stress'. Bạn nên chú ý sử dụng thì đúng và chọn từ phù hợp hơn để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping to ensure I don't forget anything important. It saves time and reduces stress during shopping trips. Moreover, it helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying.

Gợi ý: Bạn đã trả lời khá tốt với cấu trúc rõ ràng và ý tưởng hợp lý. Tuy nhiên, có một số lỗi lặp từ như 'I feel I feel' và thiếu số nhiều trong 'completed task' nên là 'completed tasks'. Bạn nên chú ý tránh lặp từ và sử dụng danh từ số nhiều khi cần thiết để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I'm working. It helps me stay organized and focus on my tasks, managing my time effectively. Moreover, I feel a sense of accomplishment when I check off completed tasks, and I find that my productivity increases when I follow a list.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác như 'prefer to go with the follow' và 'do what every whatever they they feel like'. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng cụm từ phù hợp để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Maybe some people think making a list takes too much time, or they prefer to be spontaneous and flexible, doing whatever they feel like. However, I get overwhelmed easily and don't know where to start, so making a list helps me stay on track.

Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi lặp từ và câu chưa rõ ràng, ví dụ như 'I use my I use, I use paper' và 'I need to Draw Something quickly'. Bạn nên luyện tập nói câu ngắn gọn, tránh lặp từ và sử dụng từ vựng chính xác để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tự nhiên hơn.

Ví dụ: Actually, I prefer both depending on the situation. When I have more time to plan and organize my day, I use paper because I like to physically cross things off the list. However, when I'm on the go and need to jot something down quickly, I use my phone because it's convenient.

× It save times and reduces trust during shopping trips.

✓ It saves time and reduces stress during shopping trips.

The verb 'save' should be in third person singular form 'saves' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. 'Times' should be singular 'time' as it refers to an uncountable noun in this context. 'Trust' is incorrect here; the intended word is likely 'stress'. Correcting these improves subject-verb agreement and word choice.

× It helps me stay organized and focus on my task, manage my time effectively.

✓ It helps me stay organized, focus on my tasks, and manage my time effectively.

The phrase lists multiple actions, so 'focus' and 'manage' should be parallel verbs following 'helps me'. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context of multiple tasks. Adding commas and conjunction improves sentence clarity and parallelism.

× I feel I feel a sense of accomplishment when I check off completed task and I find that my productivity increases when I follow a list.

✓ I feel a sense of accomplishment when I check off completed tasks, and I find that my productivity increases when I follow a list.

The phrase 'I feel' is repeated unnecessarily. 'Task' should be plural 'tasks' because multiple tasks are implied. Adding a comma before 'and' separates the two independent clauses properly.

× prefer to go with the follow and do what every whatever they they feel like.

✓ prefer to go with the flow and do whatever they feel like.

The phrase 'go with the follow' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'go with the flow'. 'Every whatever' is redundant; 'whatever' alone suffices. The repeated 'they' is a typographical error. Correcting these improves idiomatic expression and removes redundancy.

× But I get overwhelmed easily and don't know where to start so making this help me stay on track.

✓ But I get overwhelmed easily and don't know where to start, so making this helps me stay on track.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'making this'. Adding a comma before 'so' improves sentence structure.

× Well, actually I prefer to both depending on situation.

✓ Well, actually I prefer both depending on the situation.

The phrase 'prefer to both' is incorrect; 'prefer both' is correct. 'Depending on situation' requires the definite article 'the' before 'situation'.

× When I have more time for planting my day organizing tasks, I use my I use, I use paper.

✓ When I have more time for planning my day and organizing tasks, I use paper.

'Planting' is incorrect; the correct word is 'planning'. The phrase is awkward and repetitive; removing repeated 'I use' and adding 'and' clarifies the meaning.

× I like to cross things off the list physically when I'm when I'm on the go, I need to Draw Something quickly.

✓ I like to cross things off the list physically. When I'm on the go and need to draw something quickly, I use my phone.

The original sentence is run-on and repetitive ('when I'm when I'm'). Splitting into two sentences and correcting capitalization improves clarity and structure.

× It convenient.

✓ It is convenient.

The sentence lacks the verb 'is' to link the subject 'It' and the adjective 'convenient'. Adding 'is' completes the sentence.