Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Actually I really like making this before going to shopping. It helps me a lot. I can remember and organize the items I want to buy for instant. If I want to buy fruit I will write down them.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, making a list for work is a very efficient method. It means I can make use of most of my time, for example before meeting prepare.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
In my opinion, the reason that they don't like make list may just because they find it tedious. Also some people are busy about the tasks so they don't have enough time to make the list.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer making a list on my phone just because it's more convenient. If I chose to use paper, I need a pencil along with me every time. But if I choose my phone, apps is very helpful.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点,但语法和用词有些错误,且句子结构不够自然。建议注意动词形式和冠词的使用,避免重复表达,并且用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go. It helps me remember what I need and organize my purchases. For example, if I want to buy fruit, I write down the specific types I need.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,句子不完整,表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子,注意时态和词序,增加连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make lists for my work because it helps me use my time efficiently. For example, I prepare a list before meetings to ensure I don't forget important points.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议注意动词形式和介词的使用,句子结构应更清晰,避免重复。
Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it boring. Also, they might be too busy with their tasks to spend time writing lists.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和用词不当,句子结构不够连贯。建议注意动词时态和主谓一致,使用连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. If I use paper, I have to carry a pencil all the time. However, phone apps make it easier to manage my lists.
× Actually I really like making this before going to shopping.
✓ Actually I really like making this before going shopping.
动词go后面接动名词形式,正确表达是go shopping,而不是go to shopping。
× If I want to buy fruit I will write down them.
✓ If I want to buy fruit I will write them down.
动词短语write down后面直接接宾语,代词them应放在write和down之间。
× It means I can make use of most of my time, for example before meeting prepare.
✓ It means I can make use of most of my time, for example, preparing before meetings.
句子结构不完整,'before meeting prepare'应改为动名词短语'preparing before meetings',并加逗号分隔。
× In my opinion, the reason that they don't like make list may just because they find it tedious.
✓ In my opinion, the reason that they don't like making lists may just be because they find it tedious.
动词like后应接动名词making,且list应为复数lists,动词be缺失,应加上。
× Also some people are busy about the tasks so they don't have enough time to make the list.
✓ Also some people are busy with the tasks so they don't have enough time to make the list.
形容词busy后应接介词with,而不是about。
× If I chose to use paper, I need a pencil along with me every time.
✓ If I choose to use paper, I need a pencil with me every time.
时态应为一般现在时choose,且短语along with me不自然,改为with me更合适。
× But if I choose my phone, apps is very helpful.
✓ But if I choose my phone, apps are very helpful.
apps为复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式are。