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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Definitely one shop. I always make a list on my phone. I think it's very convenient and I can find what I want very quickly, so it can save a lot of time.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes I do. I mean work. I always make lists on my computer and I can handle it very quickly. I think it's a good way to improve our efficient in work.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

I think some people doesn't like make a list because they'll think this is too. Complex. They are often like make things by their own opinion.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer make a list on my phone because the smartphone is very common nowadays. I think it's very convenient. We don't have to make a list on paper because the paper is to complete complete.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题,例如“Definitely one shop”不符合英语习惯,建议使用完整且自然的句子表达观点。同时,回答可以更简洁,避免冗余。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list on my phone because it helps me find items quickly and saves a lot of time.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“improve our efficient”应为“improve our efficiency”,且表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的词汇和连贯的句子结构。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make lists on my computer for work because it helps me manage tasks efficiently and complete them quickly.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 语法错误较多,如“doesn't like make a list”应为“don't like making lists”,句子不连贯且表达不清晰。建议加强语法基础,使用连贯的句子表达原因。

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it too complicated and prefer to do things based on their own judgment.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,如“prefer make a list”应为“prefer to make a list”,以及“the paper is to complete complete”表达不明确。建议使用准确的表达并避免重复。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because smartphones are common and it's more convenient than using paper, which can be easily lost or damaged.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× Definitely one shop.

Definitely one shop list.

这里缺少复数形式的名词,应该说“one shop list”或者更自然的表达是“I always make a shopping list.”,因为“list”是可数名词,且语境中需要表达“购物清单”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I always make a list on my phone.

I always make a list on my phone.

此句中“make a list on my phone”是正确的表达,表示在手机上制作清单,符合英语习惯,无需修改。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I think it's very convenient and I can find what I want very quickly, so it can save a lot of time.

I think it's very convenient and I can find what I want very quickly, so it saves a lot of time.

主语是“it”,第三人称单数,谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式“saves”,否则主谓不一致。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I always make lists on my computer and I can handle it very quickly.

I always make lists on my computer and I can handle them very quickly.

“lists”是复数,指代时应使用复数代词“them”,而不是单数“it”。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I think it's a good way to improve our efficient in work.

I think it's a good way to improve our efficiency at work.

“efficient”是形容词,名词形式应为“efficiency”;“in work”应改为“at work”,表示在工作中。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× I think some people doesn't like make a list because they'll think this is too. Complex.

I think some people don't like to make a list because they think it is too complex.

“some people”是复数,谓语动词应使用复数形式“don't”;“like make”应改为“like to make”;“this is too. Complex”中“too.”和“Complex”断句错误,应合并为“too complex”。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× They are often like make things by their own opinion.

They often like to do things according to their own opinion.

“like make”应为“like to do”;“by their own opinion”应改为“according to their own opinion”,更符合英语表达习惯。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer make a list on my phone because the smartphone is very common nowadays.

I prefer to make a list on my phone because smartphones are very common nowadays.

“prefer”后应接不定式“to make”;“the smartphone”泛指应使用复数“smartphones”。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× We don't have to make a list on paper because the paper is to complete complete.

We don't have to make a list on paper because paper is too complicated.

“the paper”泛指时不加冠词;“to complete complete”应为“too complicated”,表达“太复杂”。

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