Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. This helps me remember everything I need to buy and avoid forgetting important items. It also saves me time because I can shop more efficiently.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
(không có câu trả lời)
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
As far as I'm concerned, in their opinion to make A to do list maybe. It's no use for their work or life.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
For me, I prefer to make a list on my phone because phone is open to use and it's very easy to make a list.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 90.0Gợi ý: 你的回答很自然且内容完整,但可以尝试使用更多连接词使句子更流畅,例如使用“because”或“so”来连接原因和结果。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time by making my shopping more efficient.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 你没有回答这个问题,建议直接回答是否为工作制作清单,并说明效果如何,避免遗漏问题。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work, and it helps me stay organized and complete tasks on time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达不够清晰,语法和用词有误。建议用更准确的表达说明原因,并使用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's useless for their work or daily life, so they prefer to rely on memory instead.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够自然,‘phone is open to use’不太合适。建议使用更地道的表达方式,并增加细节说明。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily add or remove items anytime.
× As far as I'm concerned, in their opinion to make A to do list maybe.
✓ As far as I'm concerned, in their opinion, making a to-do list may be unnecessary.
句子中使用了不正确的代词和表达方式,'in their opinion to make A to do list maybe'结构混乱,应该使用动名词形式'making',并且调整句子结构使其更通顺。建议使用'In their opinion, making a to-do list may be unnecessary'来表达他们认为做待办事项清单可能没用。
× It's no use for their work or life.
✓ It's of no use for their work or life.
短语'no use'前面通常需要加介词'of'构成固定搭配,表示'没有用'。原句缺少'of',导致表达不准确。应改为'It's of no use for their work or life'。
× For me, I prefer to make a list on my phone because phone is open to use and it's very easy to make a list.
✓ For me, I prefer to make a list on my phone because the phone is easy to use and it's very easy to make a list.
句子中缺少定冠词'the',导致'phone is open to use'表达不自然,且'open to use'用法不当,应该用'easy to use'。建议加上定冠词并改为'easy to use',使句子更地道。