Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I make. I made a list when I shop because I'm a person. Like prepare for many things before I made a decision.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
I'm a student so I always make a list for my study and I think it save my time and efficiently help me improve my study and make me more concentrate on my study.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Different people have different characters. I think these people may think making lists will.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够自然,语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子,直接回答问题,并用连接词丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need and avoid buying unnecessary items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较丰富,但语法和表达不够准确。建议简化句子结构,使用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: As a student, I always make a study list because it saves time and helps me concentrate better on my tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议完整表达观点,提供具体原因,并使用连接词。
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to be more spontaneous in their daily activities.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁明了,但可以增加细节使内容更丰富。建议补充原因和个人体验。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can easily edit or add items anytime.
× Yes, I make.
✓ Yes, I do.
这里的回答是对一般现在时问题的肯定回答,应该用助动词'do'来代替单独的动词'make',因为英语中一般现在时的肯定回答通常用'do'。
× I made a list when I shop because I'm a person.
✓ I make a list when I shop because I'm a person.
这里描述的是习惯性动作,应该用一般现在时'make'而不是过去时'made'。
× Like prepare for many things before I made a decision.
✓ Like preparing for many things before I make a decision.
句子中'Like'后面应该接动名词'preparing',而且前后时态要一致,使用一般现在时'make'。
× I think it save my time and efficiently help me improve my study and make me more concentrate on my study.
✓ I think it saves my time and efficiently helps me improve my study and makes me more concentrated on my study.
主语是第三人称单数,动词需要加's','concentrate'应使用形容词形式'concentrated'。
× I think these people may think making lists will.
✓ I think these people may think making lists is unnecessary.
原句不完整,缺少谓语部分,导致句子结构错误,需要补充完整的谓语部分。