List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰，存在语法错误和逻辑混乱，建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用恰当的连接词使内容连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save time and money. By planning ahead, I can avoid buying unnecessary items and stay organized.

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅的问题，建议使用更准确的时态和词汇，简洁明了地表达观点，并用连接词增强逻辑性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a daily work list to keep track of my tasks. It helps me stay organized and avoid unnecessary work, which improves my productivity and self-discipline.

Gợi ý: 回答内容不够具体且存在语法错误，建议明确表达原因，避免模糊和矛盾的表述，并使用恰当的连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory and feel confident managing tasks without writing them down. This approach saves time and feels more flexible to them.

Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰，但存在时态和语法错误，建议注意时态一致性，简化表达，并补充具体优点使回答更丰富。

Ví dụ: I used to write lists on paper, but now I prefer using my phone because it's convenient to set reminders and share lists with friends easily.

× Absolutely, because I'm like painting things in advance.

✓ Absolutely, because I like planning things in advance.

这里的 'painting' 是动词的现在分词形式，但语境中应使用动词 'plan' 的动名词形式 'planning'，表示喜欢做某事。'like' 后面接动名词表示习惯或喜好。

× We can exercise what you do each day and can prepare for the future and can improve our self-discipline skills.

✓ We can exercise what we do each day, prepare for the future, and improve our self-discipline skills.

句中 'you' 与主语 'We' 不一致，应改为 'we'。此外，句子结构重复 'can'，应简化。

× I can more clear what to do each day and I can preparation for the future.

✓ I can be clearer about what to do each day and I can prepare for the future.

'more clear' 应为比较级 'clearer'，且 'can' 后应接动词原形，'preparation' 是名词，应改为动词 'prepare'。

× Also I can avoid unnecessary jobs I need to do and can improve my organized skills and improve myself discipline.

✓ Also, I can avoid unnecessary jobs I need to do, improve my organizational skills, and improve my self-discipline.

'organized skills' 应为 'organizational skills'，'myself discipline' 应为 'my self-discipline'。

× Well, I think most of people have their self-control.

✓ Well, I think most people have their self-control.

'most of people' 中 'of' 不需要，正确用法是 'most people'。

× I think they can avoid doing necessary works on their workplace and they can spend much time on other important things.

✓ I think they can avoid doing unnecessary work at their workplace and spend much time on other important things.

'necessary works' 应为 'unnecessary work'，'work' 在此为不可数名词，且介词应为 'at' 而非 'on'。

× Well, I think in the past I used to writing down on the papers, but now with the development of technologies, I used to use phone because it's so convenient for us to send reminders and share with my friends.

✓ Well, I think in the past I used to write things down on paper, but now with the development of technology, I use my phone because it's so convenient for us to send reminders and share with my friends.

'used to' 后应接动词原形 'write'，'writing' 是错误形式。'papers' 应为不可数名词 'paper'，'used to use' 表达不当，现时应用 'use'。