Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Definitely, I find it helpful to stay organized and avoid forgetting important items. For example, last week I made a list before going to the supermarket and it saved me a lot of time.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Personally, I frequently make a list for my work. I think it is very important for me to ensure I finish my work.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Well, in my opinion, I think some people may feel may feel making list. Oh what are are terrible and waste of time because if you don't have a.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Personally, I prefer to make a list on my cell phone because I think it's more convenient for me. I can't far away my phone so it can.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 你的回答比较自然且内容相关,但可以更简洁,避免重复表达。建议在回答中使用更多连接词,使内容更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and saves time. For instance, last week, having a list allowed me to quickly find everything I needed at the supermarket.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较简短,缺少具体细节和连接词。建议增加具体例子或原因,丰富内容,使回答更完整。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make lists for my work because they help me prioritize tasks. For example, by listing my daily duties, I can focus on important jobs and complete them efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且有语法错误,表达不清晰。建议练习完整表达观点,避免重复和语法错误,使用连接词使句子流畅。
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and prefer to remember tasks mentally. Additionally, they might feel lists limit their flexibility.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且有语法错误,表达不清楚。建议完整表达理由,使用连接词,并注意语法准确性。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me, making it easy to add or check items anytime. This convenience helps me stay organized throughout the day.
× Well, in my opinion, I think some people may feel may feel making list.
✓ Well, in my opinion, I think some people may feel making lists.
这里的“list”应该用复数形式“lists”,因为指的是一般意义上的多次列清单的行为。中文解释:名词单复数错误,表示多次或多项时应使用复数形式。
× Oh what are are terrible and waste of time because if you don't have a.
✓ Oh, they are terrible and a waste of time because if you don't have one.
原句结构混乱,缺少主语和完整表达,需补充主语“they”和冠词“a”,并完成句子。中文解释:句子结构错误,缺少主语和完整表达,导致句意不清。
× I can't far away my phone so it can.
✓ I can't be far away from my phone so it can.
原句中“far away”用法不当,缺少介词“from”,且句子不完整。中文解释:介词使用错误,导致表达不完整。
× I can't far away my phone so it can.
✓ I can't be far away from my phone so it can.
“far away”后应接介词“from”表示距离,缺少介词导致表达错误。中文解释:介词使用错误,影响句子正确表达。