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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, let me see. I usually make a checklist before I going shopping. It makes me know what I need and can make shopping efficiently.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I usually make a list for my work. On weekends. I'd like to make a list for the next week's work. Sure, it works efficiently. It helps me work more easily.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Let me see, As for why don't some people like making lists? I guess make making lists is difficult for somebody, especially for someone do not like make plans. As a result, they don't make lists.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

To be honest, I prefer to make a list on paper because I I am a fan of writing. It makes me feel more confident since I usually write the plan on the paper.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误,如“before I going shopping”应为“before I go shopping”。建议注意动词形式的正确使用。此外,回答可以更自然流畅,避免重复表达“make a checklist”和“know what I need”。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go out. It helps me remember everything I need and shop more efficiently.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中句子结构不完整,如“On weekends.”是片段句,建议将句子连贯表达。同时,表达“it works efficiently”不够自然,可以用更地道的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list for my work. On weekends, I like to prepare a list for the upcoming week. It really helps me stay organized and work more effectively.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如“make making lists”应为“making lists”,以及“someone do not like”应为“someone who does not like”。建议简化句子结构,表达更清晰。

Ví dụ: I think some people find making lists difficult, especially those who don't like planning. So, they prefer not to make lists.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复词汇“I I”,需要注意口语表达的流畅性。表达“feel more confident”可以更具体说明原因。建议丰富细节,使回答更自然。

Ví dụ: To be honest, I prefer making lists on paper because I enjoy writing by hand. It helps me remember things better and feel more organized.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× I usually make a checklist before I going shopping.

I usually make a checklist before I go shopping.

这里的动词go应该用原形,因为前面有助动词before引导的时间状语从句,不能用动名词形式。

Sentence structure errors

× It makes me know what I need and can make shopping efficiently.

It helps me know what I need and allows me to shop efficiently.

句子结构不完整,makes me know不自然,应该用helps me know;can make shopping不符合习惯表达,改为allows me to shop更合适。

Sentence structure errors

× On weekends. I'd like to make a list for the next week's work.

On weekends, I'd like to make a list for the next week's work.

句子中“On weekends.”是一个不完整的句子,应与后句合并,用逗号连接。

Verb + -ing form

× I guess make making lists is difficult for somebody, especially for someone do not like make plans.

I guess making lists is difficult for somebody, especially for someone who does not like to make plans.

动词guess后面接动名词making lists;someone后面缺少关系代词who;do not应改为does not以符合第三人称单数;like后面应接不定式to make。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× especially for someone do not like make plans.

especially for someone who does not like to make plans.

缺少关系代词who,且动词do not应改为does not,like后面应接不定式to make。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I I am a fan of writing.

I am a fan of writing.

重复使用了主语I,应删除多余的一个。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

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