List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子结构较为简单。建议注意时态一致性，避免语法错误，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy, such as apples and milk.

Gợi ý: 回答内容明确，但句子结构重复且缺少连贯性。建议使用连接词使表达更流畅，同时丰富细节。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work because I tend to forget tasks. This plan ensures I complete everything important on time.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和词汇使用不当，如“border”应为“boring”。建议加强词汇准确性，并用更具体的理由支持观点。

Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it boring and prefer to enjoy more freedom in their daily lives.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议简化句子结构，注意冠词和代词的使用，并提高表达的连贯性。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because I don't have a phone at school, and writing helps me stay organized and complete my tasks efficiently.

× I often make a plan when I go to shop because it made me exactly to know what I will buy, for example apple, the milk and so on.

✓ I often make a plan when I go shopping because it helps me know exactly what I will buy, for example apples, milk and so on.

句中使用了过去时态“made”，但描述的是经常发生的动作，应使用一般现在时。此外，“go to shop”应改为“go shopping”，这是固定搭配。

× I often make a plan when I go to shop because it made me exactly to know what I will buy, for example apple, the milk and so on.

✓ I often make a plan when I go shopping because it helps me know exactly what I will buy, for example apples, milk and so on.

“apple”应使用复数形式“apples”，因为这里指的是一般的水果种类，不是特指一个苹果。

× I often make a plan when I go to shop because it made me exactly to know what I will buy, for example apple, the milk and so on.

✓ I often make a plan when I go shopping because it helps me know exactly what I will buy, for example apples, milk and so on.

“go to shop”应改为“go shopping”，因为“go”后接动词时，表示去做某事，动词需用-ing形式。

× Well, I think there are different reason for that.

✓ Well, I think there are different reasons for that.

“reason”应使用复数形式“reasons”，因为前面用了“different”，表示多个原因。

× Based on my observation, persons don't like making this because they think it's border and they prefer to live in freedom.

✓ Based on my observation, people don't like making lists because they think it's boring and they prefer to live freely.

“persons”用法不自然，应改为“people”。“making this”不明确，应改为“making lists”。“border”应为“boring”，形容词拼写错误。

× I prefer make a plan in the paper because I'm a high school student in my school.

✓ I prefer to make a plan on paper because I'm a high school student at my school.

“prefer make”应为“prefer to make”，动词不定式用法。介词“in the paper”应改为“on paper”，表示在纸上。

× I don't have the cell phone, so I prefer to make a list in my paper and it which is convenient for me to finish the task.

✓ I don't have a cell phone, so I prefer to make a list on paper, which is convenient for me to finish the task.

“the cell phone”应为“不定冠词a cell phone”，表示泛指。句中“and it which”结构错误，应改为“which”。“in my paper”应为“on paper”。