Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping. It helps me stay oriented and ensures that I don't forget any important items. For example, when I shop for families, having a list saves me time and is unnecessary purchase.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make it for my work to stay arranged and ensure I don't forget important tasks. It differently works because it helps me prioritize my 30s and management had more efficiently.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
In my opinion, I think on the one hand maybe they have a very good memories to lead them, can't forget what tasks have they to do, but on the other hand maybe they have a little tired.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think if I make a list on paper I will forget, forget to take it or lose it. But if it on my phone I can locate it every time.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了基本意思,但有些语法错误和表达不够自然。例如,“is unnecessary purchase”应为“prevents unnecessary purchases”。建议注意句子结构和词汇搭配,使表达更地道。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important items. For example, when I shop for my family, having a list saves me time and prevents unnecessary purchases.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,如“It differently works”和“prioritize my 30s and management had more efficiently”不符合英语习惯。建议简化句子,使用正确的词汇表达工作清单的作用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list for my work to stay organized and make sure I don't forget important tasks. It definitely works because it helps me prioritize my tasks and manage my time more efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够准确,如“have a very good memories to lead them”和“maybe they have a little tired”。建议使用更自然的表达方式,清晰说明原因。
Ví dụ: In my opinion, some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember their tasks easily. On the other hand, some might find making lists tiring or time-consuming.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但有重复和语法错误,如“forget, forget to take it”。建议简化句子,避免重复,并使用正确的语法。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make a list on my phone because if I use paper, I might forget to bring it or lose it. With my phone, I can always access the list easily.
× For example, when I shop for families, having a list saves me time and is unnecessary purchase.
✓ For example, when I shop for families, having a list saves me time and prevents unnecessary purchases.
这里的“unnecessary purchase”应该用复数形式“unnecessary purchases”,因为指的是多项不必要的购买。英语中可数名词在泛指多个时需用复数形式。
× It differently works because it helps me prioritize my 30s and management had more efficiently.
✓ It works differently because it helps me prioritize my tasks and manage them more efficiently.
“differently”应放在动词后面,且“my 30s”应为“my tasks”,另外“management had more efficiently”结构错误,应改为“manage them more efficiently”。这里涉及形容词、副词位置和词汇选择错误。
× In my opinion, I think on the one hand maybe they have a very good memories to lead them, can't forget what tasks have they to do, but on the other hand maybe they have a little tired.
✓ In my opinion, on the one hand, maybe they have very good memories to guide them and can't forget what tasks they have to do, but on the other hand, maybe they are a little tired.
“a very good memories”中“memories”是复数,前面不应加不定冠词“a”;“to lead them”应为“to guide them”;“can't forget what tasks have they to do”语序错误,应为“what tasks they have to do”;“have a little tired”应为“are a little tired”,因为“tired”是形容词,需用系动词。
× But if it on my phone I can locate it every time.
✓ But if it is on my phone, I can locate it every time.
句子缺少系动词“is”,导致语法错误。正确结构应为“if it is on my phone”。