List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 답변이 자연스럽고 명확하지만, 좀 더 구체적인 예시나 개인적인 경험을 추가하면 더 효과적일 것입니다. 예를 들어, 어떤 물건을 리스트에 넣는지 구체적으로 설명하거나, 리스트 덕분에 어떤 상황에서 도움이 되었는지 말해보세요.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop at the market because it helps me stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying. For example, last week I planned to buy vegetables and fruits only, so I avoided buying snacks that I usually crave. This method helps me organize my shopping efficiently and ensures I don't forget important items.

Gợi ý: 답변이 잘 구성되어 있고 논리적입니다. 하지만 연결어를 조금 더 다양하게 사용하고, 구체적인 예시를 추가하면 더 자연스럽고 풍부한 답변이 될 것입니다.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really like to make a list for my work because I usually have many texts to complete. By prioritizing my tasks, I can focus on the most important ones first. For instance, yesterday I completed a report before moving on to emails, which made my work more efficient. Consequently, this method helps me stay organized and reduces stress.

Gợi ý: 답변이 다소 반복적이고 문법적으로 부자연스러운 부분이 있습니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 표현하고, 다양한 이유를 제시하며 연결어를 활용해 보세요.

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they feel burdened by the tasks they have to complete before the deadline. Moreover, lists can make them feel more stressed as they constantly remind them of their responsibilities. Therefore, they prefer to avoid making lists.

Gợi ý: 답변에 문법적 오류가 있고, 표현이 다소 어색합니다. 문장을 더 자연스럽게 다듬고, 이유를 구체적으로 설명하며 연결어를 사용해 보세요.

Ví dụ: Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is easier than using paper. Also, since I always carry my phone with me, I can check my list anytime, which is very convenient.

× Because they can get some feeling of burden when they make a list, because making lists means they have to do that until the deadline.

✓ Because they can get a feeling of burden when they make a list, because making lists means they have to do that until the deadline.

'Some feeling' is incorrect here; 'a feeling' is the correct quantifier to use with singular countable nouns like 'feeling'.

× So it makes them more stressed.

✓ So it makes them more stressed.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× So I think they don't like that.

✓ So I think they don't like that.

This sentence is grammatically correct; no correction needed.

× Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it is more easier than making a list on paper and I can see any time if I use my phone because I always bring my phone anywhere.

✓ Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it is easier than making a list on paper and I can check it anytime if I use my phone because I always bring my phone everywhere.

'More easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already the comparative form; 'more' should not be used with comparatives. 'See any time' is awkward; 'check it anytime' is clearer. 'Anywhere' is incorrect here; 'everywhere' is the correct adverb to express carrying the phone in all places.