List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Жауабыңызда сөйлемдер толық емес және кейбір жерлерде мағынасы түсініксіз. Сұраққа нақты жауап беріп, сөйлемдерді толық және логикалық байланысты етіп құрастырыңыз. Мысалы, артық сөздерді алып тастаңыз және нақты мысалдармен толықтырыңыз.

Ví dụ: I usually make a detailed shopping list when I need to buy many items. However, if I only need a few things, I prefer to shop without a list because it's quicker and simpler.

Gợi ý: Жауабыңызда қайталанатын сөздер мен сөйлем құрылымы дұрыс емес. Сұраққа нақты және қысқа жауап беріп, сөйлемдерді дұрыс құрастырыңыз. Қосымша ақпаратты байланыстыру үшін байланыстыру сөздерін қолданыңыз.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and prevents me from forgetting important tasks.

Gợi ý: Жауабыңызда мағынасы толық ашылмаған және түсініксіз сөйлемдер бар. Нақты себептерді түсінікті түрде айтыңыз және мысалдармен толықтырыңыз. Қосымша ақпаратты байланыстыру үшін байланыстыру сөздерін қолданыңыз.

Ví dụ: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time. They prefer to do things spontaneously and feel that lists limit their flexibility.

Gợi ý: Жауабыңыз жақсы, бірақ сөйлемдерді біршама қысқарту және байланыстыру сөздерін қосу арқылы табиғи әрі тиімді етуге болады. Мысалы, "because" және "so" сияқты сөздерді дұрыс қолданыңыз.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is more convenient than paper. I can carry my phone everywhere, and it's also better for the environment.

× Personally, it depends on the situation I have.

✓ Personally, it depends on the situation.

The phrase 'I have' is unnecessary and makes the sentence awkward. The sentence is clearer and grammatically correct without it.

× For example, when I have to buy a.

✓ For example, when I have to buy something.

The sentence is incomplete and ends abruptly with 'a'. Adding 'something' completes the thought and makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I make a detail list before shopping.

✓ I make a detailed list before shopping.

The adjective 'detail' is incorrect here; the correct adjective form is 'detailed' to describe the list.

× But however when I go for a few things, I don't make a list.

✓ However, when I go for a few things, I don't make a list.

Using both 'But' and 'however' together is redundant. Use one conjunction to start the sentence properly.

× Yes, I always make a list for make A to do list for my work because it helps me to stay organized and avoid forgetting the things I, uh, I planned to do.

✓ Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized and avoid forgetting the things I planned to do.

The phrase 'make a list for make A to do list' is incorrect and redundant. Correct phrasing is 'make a to-do list'. Also, 'helps me to stay' can be simplified to 'helps me stay'.

× From my point of view, some people don't like making a list because they find it time consuming and they think that they prefer making things spontaneously.

✓ From my point of view, some people don't like making a list because they find it time-consuming and prefer to do things spontaneously.

'Time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective. Also, 'they think that they prefer making things spontaneously' is awkward; better to say 'prefer to do things spontaneously'.

× For example, they don't want to afford.

✓ For example, they don't want to be constrained by a list.

The sentence 'they don't want to afford' is incomplete and unclear. It likely intends to express that they don't want to be restricted or constrained, so a clearer expression is provided.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient rather than using a paper so I can carry on my phone everywhere and it is also environmentally friendly.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient than using paper; I can carry my phone everywhere, and it is also environmentally friendly.

'Using a paper' is incorrect; 'using paper' is correct. Also, 'carry on my phone' is incorrect; it should be 'carry my phone'. The sentence is improved by adding punctuation and clearer phrasing.