List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时语法错误较多，时态使用不准确，且句子结构较为混乱。建议注意时态一致性，简化句子结构，使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. If I need to buy many items, I usually make a list beforehand. However, if I just go shopping casually, I don't make a list and buy things spontaneously if I see something I like.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如“effectiveness”应为“effective”，句子不够连贯。建议加强语法基础，使用正确词汇，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me set deadlines and organize my tasks. This method makes me feel more secure and efficient.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰，存在重复和语法错误。建议避免重复，表达观点时更具体，并使用恰当的连接词。

Ví dụ: Some people prefer to keep tasks in their mind because they find making lists unnecessary or time-consuming. However, I suggest they try making a list to improve their organization.

Gợi ý: 回答中有明显语法错误和用词错误，如“makeup list”应为“make a list”，且句子结构混乱。建议简化句子，注意词汇准确性和语法正确性。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember them better than typing on my phone.

× If I had to buy a lot of things in the shop, I will do a list before,

✓ If I have to buy a lot of things in the shop, I will make a list beforehand,

这里的条件句是第一类条件句，表示真实或可能发生的情况，主句用一般将来时，条件句用一般现在时。原句中条件句用了过去时'had to'，不符合时态搭配规则，应改为一般现在时'have to'。另外，'do a list'不地道，改为'make a list'更合适，'before'应改为副词'beforehand'。

× but if I just went there in the shop I will not make a list

✓ but if I just go to the shop, I will not make a list

同样是第一类条件句，条件从句应使用一般现在时，原句用了过去时'went'，应改为'go'。

× and if I saw something I want, I will buy it with no hesitation.

✓ and if I see something I want, I will buy it with no hesitation.

条件句应使用一般现在时，原句用了过去时'saw'，应改为'see'。

× I think making a list for work is very effectiveness, very effective because it's give me a deadline that when should I do something and it gave me a whole safety.

✓ I think making a list for work is very effective because it gives me a deadline for when I should do something and it gives me a sense of security.

'effectiveness'是名词，句中应使用形容词'effective'来修饰主语。'it's give'应改为'it gives'，主谓一致。'that when should I do something'语序错误，应改为'for when I should do something'。'gave me a whole safety'表达不自然，应改为' gives me a sense of security'。

× I think these people may prefer doing things by their in their mind.

✓ I think these people may prefer doing things in their mind.

'by their in their mind'结构错误，正确表达是'in their mind'，表示在他们的脑海中。

× Of course they are a little bit lazy and maybe they think making a list is useless, but I recommend these people to make a list for a try.

✓ Of course they are a little bit lazy and maybe they think making a list is useless, but I recommend these people to try making a list.

'make a list for a try'表达不地道，应改为'try making a list'，更符合英语习惯。

× I prefer makeup list on a paper because I think writing something down will make me remember them strongly than just typing on the phone because I think her writing will give me a deep impression than typing.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I think writing something down helps me remember it better than just typing on the phone, because I think handwriting gives me a deeper impression than typing.

'makeup list'应为'make a list'。'on a paper'应为'on paper'。'make me remember them strongly'表达不自然，应为'helps me remember it better'。'her writing'应为'handwriting'。'a deep impression'应为'a deeper impression'，比较级形式。