List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然且内容相关，但句子较长且部分表达重复，建议简化句子结构，避免冗余，同时增加连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I have a poor memory. For instance, when I go to the supermarket, I write down the necessities on paper to ensure I don't forget anything.

Gợi ý: 回答内容丰富，但部分句子语法不够准确，且表达略显重复。建议注意语法准确性，使用更多连接词使逻辑更清晰。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list before starting work because it helps me remember my tasks for the day. Moreover, completing the list gives me a strong sense of achievement, which motivates me to keep doing it.

Gợi ý: 回答较为简单，缺少更具体的细节和连接词，建议丰富内容，使用更多连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Some people might dislike making lists because they have a good memory and prefer to remember things mentally. Additionally, others may find list-making too complicated or feel too lazy to do it.

Gợi ý: 回答内容相关，但部分表达不够自然，且有语法错误。建议注意冠词使用和句子结构，提升表达自然度。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because there are many apps that help me remember tasks. For example, I use an app called Memo, which allows me to write down my to-dos and sends reminders.

× I'd like to make a list using paper because it can help me remember the things which I need to buy.

✓ I'd like to make a list on paper because it can help me remember the things which I need to buy.

这里介词用错了，应该用'on paper'表示“用纸”，而不是'using paper'。'using'是动名词形式，不适合此处表达方式。

× First off, I think this is a good way to help you remind something which I need to do in that day.

✓ First off, I think this is a good way to help me remember something which I need to do that day.

这里代词用错了，主语是'I'，所以应该用'me'而不是'you'。另外，动词'remind'用法错误，应该用'member'表示“记住”。

× Plus, when I finish them, I always get a sense of achievement and to be honest, I'm really addicted to it.

✓ Plus, when I finish them, I always get a sense of achievement and to be honest, I'm really addicted to it.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× They don't need to make a list to remember something, they just remember the things in their mind.

✓ They don't need to make a list to remember something; they just remember the things in their minds.

'mind'应使用复数形式'minds'，因为主语是复数'they'，表示他们各自的脑海。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× I'd like to make a list on a app which called Memo.

✓ I'd like to make a list on an app which is called Memo.

'app'以元音音素开头，前面应使用不定冠词'an'而不是'a'。另外，缺少动词'is'，应为'which is called'。

× I can write down something which I need to do and they always can remind me.

✓ I can write down something which I need to do and it can always remind me.

'something'是单数，后面指代应使用单数代词'it'，而不是复数'they'。