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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

No, I don't. I like to buy things freely and see what I find interesting and I can remember to buy things that I need.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes I do. Making a list for my work helps me to stay organized and focused on what I need to do. I really like to check things off 1 by 1.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Well, I guess they might prefer to keep things flexible. I mean making this brings additional stress to them.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to make a list on my phone because I think it's more convenient, especially when I need to update or delete something without a mess.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但表达略显冗长且逻辑不够清晰。建议简化句子结构,避免重复表达,并使用连接词使回答更连贯。

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to browse freely and buy things that catch my interest. However, I always try to remember the essentials I need.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,表达较自然,但可以增加连接词使句子更流畅,同时避免口语化数字表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Making a list helps me stay organized and focused on my tasks. Moreover, I enjoy checking off each item one by one, which gives me a sense of accomplishment.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达不准确的问题,建议使用更准确的表达方式,并增加具体细节来支持观点。

Ví dụ: Some people might dislike making lists because they prefer to keep their plans flexible. Additionally, they may find that making lists adds unnecessary stress.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答自然且内容具体,但可以使用更多连接词和丰富词汇,使表达更流畅和多样化。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. For instance, I can easily update or delete items without creating a mess, which saves time and effort.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I like to buy things freely and see what I find interesting and I can remember to buy things that I need.

I like to buy things freely and see what I find interesting, and I can remember to buy the things that I need.

这里缺少逗号来分隔两个并列的句子,使句子结构更清晰。并且在“things that I need”前加上定冠词“the”,因为指的是特定的东西。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I mean making this brings additional stress to them.

I mean making this brings additional stress on them.

动词短语“bring stress on someone”是固定搭配,表示“给某人带来压力”,应使用介词“on”而非“to”。

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