Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Actually yes, I usually make a list to to ensure I don't forget anything important. Additionally, it helps me to stay within my budget and avoid impulse buying.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Personally not. I don't have the habit to write down my work in a list. I prefer to keep track of tasks in my mind and I prefer the more.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I suppose maybe they lack of habit or experience. I mean that they might have not learned about how to use it well or found the method works for them.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Honestly, I prefer the latter 1. I think is more convenient for me to edit and rearrange my assignment on the phone and I can share my experience or the notes to my friends and.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 你的回答较为自然且内容相关,但有轻微重复("to to")和表达可以更简洁。建议避免重复词汇,句子结构更紧凑,同时可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list to avoid forgetting important items. Moreover, it helps me control my spending and prevents impulse purchases, which saves money.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答不够完整且有语法错误,表达不清晰。建议直接回答问题,避免语法错误,并补充原因或细节使回答更完整。
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make lists for work because I prefer to remember my tasks mentally. However, sometimes this makes me forget small details.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答表达有语法错误,且句子结构不够流畅。建议使用更准确的语法和连接词,使表达更自然,同时提供更具体的原因。
Ví dụ: Some people might dislike making lists because they are not used to it or haven't found a method that suits them. Also, they may find it time-consuming or unnecessary.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整,且用词不准确。建议完整表达观点,避免数字代替词汇,使用正确的连接词,并具体说明原因。
Ví dụ: Honestly, I prefer making lists on my phone because it's easier to edit and rearrange tasks. Plus, I can quickly share my notes with friends.
× Actually yes, I usually make a list to to ensure I don't forget anything important.
✓ Actually yes, I usually make a list to ensure I don't forget anything important.
句子中出现了重复的“to”,这是多余的,应删除一个。
× Personally not. I don't have the habit to write down my work in a list.
✓ Personally not. I don't have the habit of writing down my work in a list.
习惯表达为“have the habit of doing something”,这里应使用介词“of”并将动词改为动名词形式。
× I prefer to keep track of tasks in my mind and I prefer the more.
✓ I prefer to keep track of tasks in my mind and prefer that way more.
句子结构不完整,“I prefer the more”缺少宾语,需补充完整表达。
× I suppose maybe they lack of habit or experience.
✓ I suppose maybe they lack habit or experience.
动词“lack”后不加介词“of”,直接跟名词。
× I mean that they might have not learned about how to use it well or found the method works for them.
✓ I mean that they might not have learned how to use it well or found the method works for them.
“might have not”应改为“might not have”,且“learned about how to use it”中“about”多余,应去掉。
× Honestly, I prefer the latter 1.
✓ Honestly, I prefer the latter.
“the latter”后不应加数字“1”,这是多余的。
× I think is more convenient for me to edit and rearrange my assignment on the phone and I can share my experience or the notes to my friends and.
✓ I think it is more convenient for me to edit and rearrange my assignments on the phone, and I can share my experiences or notes with my friends.
句子缺少主语“it”,“assignment”应为复数形式,“share ... to”应改为“share ... with”,句尾“and”多余。