Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Well, no, I don't make a list. While I saw because I'm a little bit clumsy type of people, I cannot list the shoppings I am going to buy because when I go to buy something almost always it's I cannot do it properly as I.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list of my works. I always try to break my words in into separate To Do List and and I always make full use of it so that I can I do not forget any anything any minor task that I was assigned to.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Well, I think people do not want to make a list because they are very lazy. In my opinion, if you have a list, you definitely will have a better result in doing something because you will not forget anything in while you are doing the work because when you are in a hurry you always.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Well, I cannot make a list in any paper because I actually forgot the paper in anywhere I go. So it is better to make a list in my phone. I always do it in my phone. And you can also always strike through what you have done already or you can add new task while you are.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to give a direct response first, then explain briefly with clear sentences. Avoid redundancy and incomplete thoughts. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget it or lose it. Also, I find it difficult to plan exactly what to buy in advance since I often change my mind while shopping.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but has some grammar mistakes and repetition. Use linking words like 'so' or 'because' to explain why the list helps you. Try to be more concise and clear.
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me organize tasks. By breaking down my work into smaller parts, I can ensure that I don't forget any minor assignments.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Your answer is incomplete and a bit negative. Avoid generalizing people as 'lazy'. Provide a clear reason and support it with examples or explanations. Use linking words to connect ideas.
Ví dụ: Some people avoid making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to rely on memory. However, having a list can improve productivity since it helps prevent forgetting important tasks, especially when busy.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but incomplete at the end. Try to finish your sentences fully and use linking words like 'because' to explain your preference. Avoid repetition and improve sentence structure.
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I often forget paper lists. Also, using my phone allows me to easily check off completed tasks and add new ones whenever needed.
× While I saw because I'm a little bit clumsy type of people, I cannot list the shoppings I am going to buy because when I go to buy something almost always it's I cannot do it properly as I.
✓ Because I'm a little bit clumsy type of person, I cannot list the shopping items I am going to buy because when I go to buy something, almost always I cannot do it properly.
The sentence incorrectly uses 'saw' (past tense) and 'shoppings' (incorrect plural). The verb tense should be present to match the context. Also, 'type of people' should be 'type of person' to agree in number. 'Shoppings' is not a correct plural form; 'shopping items' or 'things to buy' is better.
× I always make a list of my works.
✓ I always make a list of my work.
The word 'work' is uncountable when referring to tasks or job duties, so 'works' is incorrect here. Use 'work' without 's' to indicate tasks collectively.
× I always try to break my words in into separate To Do List and and I always make full use of it so that I can I do not forget any anything any minor task that I was assigned to.
✓ I always try to break my work into separate To-Do lists, and I always make full use of them so that I do not forget any minor task that I am assigned to.
The sentence has redundant words ('words' instead of 'work', repeated 'and'), incorrect preposition ('in into'), and awkward phrasing. 'Words' should be 'work', 'in into' should be 'into', and 'any anything any' is redundant. Also, 'was assigned' should be 'am assigned' to match present tense.
× I think people do not want to make a list because they are very lazy.
✓ I think some people do not want to make a list because they are very lazy.
Adding 'some' clarifies the subject. The original sentence is grammatically correct but can be improved for clarity.
× If you have a list, you definitely will have a better result in doing something because you will not forget anything in while you are doing the work because when you are in a hurry you always.
✓ If you have a list, you will definitely have better results in doing something because you will not forget anything while you are working, even when you are in a hurry.
The original sentence is incomplete and has awkward phrasing ('in while', 'you always' incomplete). The correction completes the thought and improves clarity and flow.
× I cannot make a list in any paper because I actually forgot the paper in anywhere I go.
✓ I cannot make a list on any paper because I usually forget the paper wherever I go.
The preposition 'in' is incorrect with 'paper'; 'on' is correct. Also, 'forgot' should be 'forget' to match present tense, and 'in anywhere' is incorrect; 'wherever' is appropriate.
× And you can also always strike through what you have done already or you can add new task while you are.
✓ You can also always strike through what you have already done or add new tasks while you are using it.
The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. Adding 'using it' completes the thought. 'New task' should be plural 'new tasks' to match context.