List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but it contains some redundancy and minor grammatical errors. Try to avoid repeating words like 'to' and improve sentence structure for natural flow. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually keep a shopping list in my phone's notes app. Whenever I remember something I need, I quickly add it, which helps me avoid forgetting items while shopping.

Gợi ý: Your response addresses the question but has grammatical mistakes and some awkward phrasing. Avoid repeating words and use linking words like 'so' or 'therefore' to connect ideas. Also, maintain consistent tense and improve sentence clarity.

Ví dụ: Yes, I create a to-do list and keep a diary every day. This helps me avoid wasting time, so I always know what to do next. Therefore, it has made me more organized and efficient.

Gợi ý: Your answer attempts to explain reasons but has grammatical errors and awkward expressions. Use correct phrases like 'on one hand' and 'on the other hand'. Also, avoid repeating 'making lists' unnecessarily and use linking words properly.

Ví dụ: On one hand, some people believe they can remember everything without lists, so they think making lists is unnecessary. On the other hand, others are simply too lazy to make lists every day.

Gợi ý: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and some redundancy. Use linking words like 'however' to contrast ideas and improve sentence structure for clarity and naturalness.

Ví dụ: It depends on the situation. For instance, if I'm outdoors without a pen or paper, I prefer to use my phone. However, when I'm studying or at home with paper available, I like to write my list on paper.

× Yes, actually I have shopping list in my phone's notes section and I instantly write what came to my mind at the moment and it helps me a lot to to not forget what I want when I'm shopping in the store.

✓ Yes, actually I have a shopping list in my phone's notes section and I instantly write what comes to my mind at the moment and it helps me a lot not to forget what I want when I'm shopping in the store.

The phrase 'shopping list' requires the indefinite article 'a' because it is a singular countable noun. Also, 'what came to my mind' should be 'what comes to my mind' to maintain present tense consistency. The phrase 'to to not forget' contains a repeated 'to' and incorrect word order; it should be 'not to forget'.

× Yes, actually I have shopping list in my phone's notes section and I instantly write what came to my mind at the moment and it helps me a lot to to not forget what I want when I'm shopping in the store.

✓ Yes, actually I have a shopping list in my phone's notes section and I instantly write what comes to my mind at the moment and it helps me a lot not to forget what I want when I'm shopping in the store.

The verb phrase 'what came to my mind' should be in present tense 'what comes to my mind' to match the present context. Also, 'to to not forget' is incorrect; it should be 'not to forget' to maintain correct infinitive form.

× Yes, actually I make a working list and my diary notebook every day.

✓ Yes, actually I make a work list and use my diary notebook every day.

The phrase 'working list' is uncommon; 'work list' is more appropriate. Also, 'my diary notebook' is better expressed as 'use my diary notebook' to clarify the action.

× It helps me a lot to to prevent wasting time and I know exactly what should I do next.

✓ It helps me a lot to prevent wasting time and I know exactly what I should do next.

The phrase 'to to prevent' has a repeated 'to' which is incorrect. Also, the question word order 'what should I do next' is incorrect in a statement; it should be 'what I should do next'.

× And it was very beneficial for me to be more organized and efficient.

✓ And it is very beneficial for me to be more organized and efficient.

The sentence refers to a general benefit that is ongoing, so present tense 'is' is more appropriate than past tense 'was'.

× In one hand, most people don't making lists because they think they can manage everything in their minds and it's not beneficial to making lists and in other hand some people are just too lazy to making lists every day.

✓ On one hand, most people don't make lists because they think they can manage everything in their minds and it's not beneficial to make lists, and on the other hand, some people are just too lazy to make lists every day.

The phrase 'don't making' is incorrect; it should be 'don't make' because 'do' requires the base form of the verb. Also, 'to making' should be 'to make' after 'beneficial' and 'lazy to'. The phrases 'in one hand' and 'in other hand' should be 'on one hand' and 'on the other hand'. Commas are added for clarity.

× Actually it depends on my circumstances at the moment.

✓ Actually, it depends on my circumstances at the moment.

A comma after 'Actually' improves sentence clarity. The preposition 'on' is correctly used here.

× For example, if I outdoor and I don't have any pen or paper with me, I prefer to write it down on my phone.

✓ For example, if I am outdoors and don't have any pen or paper with me, I prefer to write it down on my phone.

The phrase 'if I outdoor' is incorrect; it should be 'if I am outdoors' to use the correct verb and noun form. Also, 'I don't have' is fine, but 'I' can be omitted in the second clause for conciseness.

× But other times that I'm studying or I'm at home that I have paper, I prefer to write it down on the paper.

✓ But other times, when I'm studying or at home and have paper, I prefer to write it down on paper.

The phrase 'other times that I'm studying or I'm at home that I have paper' is awkward and incorrect. It should be 'other times, when I'm studying or at home and have paper' for clarity and correct sentence structure. Also, 'on the paper' is better as 'on paper'.