List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'when I show' instead of 'when I shop'. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question and providing a clear reason. Avoid redundancy and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it helps me remember all the items I need to buy and saves time.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammatical mistakes and awkward phrasing, such as 'read the list for my works' and 'preference time periods'. Try to use clearer and more natural expressions. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my work, especially for printing tasks, so I can manage them within the preferred time frames. Usually, this method works well, but sometimes unexpected urgent orders disrupt my schedule.

Gợi ý: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases like 'dislike me' and 'somewhat find less overwhelming'. Try to directly address the question with clear reasons and use linking words to organize your ideas logically. Avoid vague expressions and be specific.

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find the process time-consuming. Also, they may feel that lists limit their creativity and prefer to keep their plans flexible rather than structured.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors, such as 'make a list on myself' and 'phone may be remained uncharged'. Try to clearly state your preference and explain your reasons using simple and correct language. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it gives me reminders. However, sometimes the phone might run out of battery, so in those cases, I use paper lists instead.

× Yes, I prefer to make a list when I show as I could remember all the required items to buy. So yes I.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list when I shop as I can remember all the required items to buy. So yes, I do.

The original sentence contains a sentence structure error with the word 'show' instead of 'shop' and an incomplete sentence 'So yes I.' The correction replaces 'show' with 'shop' to match the context and completes the sentence with 'So yes, I do.' to make it grammatically correct and clear.

× Yes, I read the list for my works as well As for my printing works so that I can manage all that in the preference time periods.

✓ Yes, I read the list for my work as well as for my printing work so that I can manage all that in the preferred time periods.

The word 'works' is incorrectly used in plural form when referring to 'work' as an uncountable noun. Also, 'preference time periods' is corrected to 'preferred time periods' to use the correct adjective form.

× Yeah, mostly it works, but sometimes due to any emergency order new work, it doesn't.

✓ Yeah, mostly it works, but sometimes, due to an emergency order for new work, it doesn't.

The original sentence lacks proper article usage and word order. Adding 'an' before 'emergency order' and 'for' before 'new work' clarifies the meaning and corrects the sentence structure.

× Some people dislike me, yes, because we find that process time consuming or something.

✓ Some people dislike making lists, yes, because they find that process time-consuming or something.

The pronouns 'me' and 'we' are incorrectly used. The subject should be 'some people' and the pronoun referring to them is 'they'. Also, 'time consuming' should be hyphenated as 'time-consuming' when used as an adjective.

× They may feel less limit their creativity or spontaneously referring to future plans flexible rather than structured.

✓ They may feel it limits their creativity or prefer to refer to future plans spontaneously, being flexible rather than structured.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. The correction restructures the sentence to clearly express the idea that some people feel making lists limits creativity and prefer flexibility.

× Additionally, some individuals might find less overwhelming.

✓ Additionally, some individuals might find it less overwhelming.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks an object. Adding 'it' clarifies what is being found less overwhelming.

× I would prefer to make a list on myself because it also gives me reminders but in case of paper I could forgot about that and also but in some cases the phone may be remained uncharged so I can have impatience for them.

✓ I would prefer to make a list on my phone because it also gives me reminders, but in the case of paper, I could forget about it. Also, sometimes the phone may remain uncharged, so I can get impatient with them.

The pronoun 'myself' is incorrectly used instead of 'my phone'. 'Forgot' is corrected to 'forget' to match present tense. 'May be remained' is corrected to 'may remain' for proper verb form. The sentence is restructured for clarity and grammatical correctness.