Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I always make a list when my shop because I think it can help me remember what I need and I can find it quickly so I always take it in purple when I go to.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do like to list for my work. I think it is work because when I should do something the last will Remember Me. What should I do so?
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people more like a few. They emotion. Emotion like. Designed by yours, by themselves.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I do prefer to make a list on my because I always take my when I go out and I think it is very convenient because if I want I can say it whatever.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题,建议加强句子结构的准确性和逻辑性,避免冗余。可以使用更自然的表达方式,并且注意单词的正确使用。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and find items quickly. I usually write it down on a purple notebook that I take with me.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,语法和表达混乱,建议学习如何用完整句子表达观点,并使用连接词使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like to make lists for my work because they help me remember the tasks I need to complete. This way, I can organize my day better and avoid forgetting important duties.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答内容不明确且无逻辑,建议理解问题后用完整句子表达原因,提供具体细节支持观点。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory or feel that lists limit their flexibility and creativity.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清,建议明确指出偏好并解释原因,使用连贯的句子结构。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. It's very convenient, and I can even use voice commands to add items quickly.
× Yes, I always make a list when my shop because I think it can help me remember what I need and I can find it quickly so I always take it in purple when I go to.
✓ Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I think it can help me remember what I need and I can find it quickly, so I always take it with me when I go.
句子中“my shop”应为“I shop”,因为主语是第一人称单数,动词应与主语一致。并且“take it in purple when I go to”表达不清,推测为“take it with me when I go”,表示带着购物清单。
× Yes, I always make a list when my shop because I think it can help me remember what I need and I can find it quickly so I always take it in purple when I go to.
✓ Yes, I always make a list when I shop because I think it can help me remember what I need and I can find it quickly, so I always take it with me when I go.
“take it in purple when I go to”中的介词使用错误,应为“take it with me when I go”,表示“带着它”。
× Yes, I do like to list for my work. I think it is work because when I should do something the last will Remember Me. What should I do so?
✓ Yes, I do like to make lists for my work. I think it works because when I should do something, the list will remind me what I should do.
“like to list”应为“like to make lists”,动词搭配错误;“the last will Remember Me”应为“the list will remind me”,代词和表达错误;“What should I do so?”表达不清,改为“what I should do”。
× Some people more like a few. They emotion. Emotion like. Designed by yours, by themselves.
✓ Some people prefer fewer lists. They are emotional. They like to design lists by themselves.
“more like a few”表达不正确,应为“prefer fewer lists”;“They emotion. Emotion like.”句子不完整,需补充谓语;“Designed by yours, by themselves.”表达混乱,改为“designed by themselves”。
× I do prefer to make a list on my because I always take my when I go out and I think it is very convenient because if I want I can say it whatever.
✓ I do prefer to make a list on my phone because I always take it with me when I go out, and I think it is very convenient because if I want, I can say it whatever.
“make a list on my”缺少名词,应为“make a list on my phone”;“I always take my”缺少宾语,应为“take it with me”;“say it whatever”表达不清,保留原意但语法更正。