Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No, not often. When I go shopping, I usually already know what I need to buy, so I don't feel the need to make the list.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
No, I don't make this for my work, but I'll set a deadline for my work or some project.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
For me making this doesn't help me to finish the work efficiency.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
If I really need to make this, I will make it on my paper because if I make it on my phone I will forget where I put it on.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但表达略显冗长且缺少连接词。建议在回答中使用连接词使句子更连贯,同时可以增加具体细节来丰富内容。
Ví dụ: No, I don't often make a list when I shop because I usually know exactly what I need. However, if I shop for a special event, I might prepare a list to avoid forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,表达有些模糊。建议直接回答问题,并用连接词补充具体细节,说明为什么不做清单而用截止日期。
Ví dụ: No, I don't make lists for my work. Instead, I set deadlines for my projects because it helps me stay focused and complete tasks on time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 句子结构不完整,表达不自然。建议使用完整句子并解释原因,增加连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they feel it doesn't improve their work efficiency, and they prefer to work more flexibly.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 表达基本清楚,但句子结构和用词不够准确。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并用连接词说明原因。
Ví dụ: If I need to make a list, I prefer to write it on paper because I often forget where I save it on my phone.
× For me making this doesn't help me to finish the work efficiency.
✓ For me, making this doesn't help me finish the work efficiently.
这里'making'作为动名词使用是正确的,但后面的表达不自然。'help me to finish'中to可以省略,且'efficiency'是名词,需用副词'efficiently'修饰动词'finish'。建议改为'help me finish the work efficiently'。
× No, I don't make this for my work, but I'll set a deadline for my work or some project.
✓ No, I don't make lists for my work, but I'll set a deadline for my work or some project.
这里的'this'指代不明确,应该用复数名词'lists'来指代'list',因为前文提到的是'list'的复数概念。使用正确的代词可以使句子更清晰。
× If I really need to make this, I will make it on my paper because if I make it on my phone I will forget where I put it on.
✓ If I really need to make this, I will make it on paper because if I make it on my phone, I will forget where I put it.
'on my paper'应改为'on paper',因为这里指的是纸张的媒介,不需要所有格。'put it on'中的'on'多余,'forget where I put it'即可。去掉多余的介词使表达更地道。