List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by using correct tenses and avoiding redundancy. Also, provide a direct topic sentence and then add specific examples with linking words.

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list when I go shopping. For example, I include essential grocery items like dal, biscuits, and spices to ensure I don't forget anything.

Gợi ý: Focus on giving a clear and complete answer with proper sentence structure. Use linking words to explain why making lists is helpful, and provide specific reasons or examples.

Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me stay organized. For instance, when I list the items needed for the shop, I can manage my tasks more efficiently.

Gợi ý: Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas and provide specific reasons why some people avoid making lists.

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they have a lot of experience and can remember everything easily. Also, some workers prefer to rely on their memory rather than writing things down.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more concise and natural by avoiding repetition. Use linking words to explain your preference and give specific examples of apps or features you like.

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and there are many useful apps like To Do List that help me organize tasks efficiently.

× Yes, actually I made a list to guide the accommodations like grocery items like Dal, biscuits or some spices, right?

✓ Yes, actually I make a list to guide the accommodations like grocery items such as Dal, biscuits, or some spices, right?

The question is in present tense 'Do you make a list', so the answer should also be in present tense. Using 'made' is past tense, which does not fit the question's context. Use 'make' to indicate habitual action.

× Yes, actually I made a list to guide the accommodations like grocery items like Dal, biscuits or some spices, right?

✓ Yes, actually I make a list to guide the purchase of grocery items such as Dal, biscuits, or some spices, right?

The phrase 'guide the accommodations like grocery items' is incorrect. 'Accommodations' is not appropriate here; 'purchase' or 'shopping' fits better. Also, 'like' is repeated unnecessarily; use 'such as' for examples.

× Yes, actually it's really good making lists for our shop or something because it's it's work.

✓ Yes, actually it's really good to make lists for our shopping or something because it works.

The sentence structure is awkward and repetitive ('it's it's work'). 'Making lists' should be 'to make lists' to fit the sentence. 'Our shop' likely means 'our shopping' or 'shopping'.

× Because in my experience I'm telling that when we are listing up the items that we want to our shop, then we can.

✓ In my experience, I can say that when we list the items we want to buy, then we can manage better.

The original sentence is incomplete and awkward. 'Listing up' is incorrect; use 'list'. 'Want to our shop' is incorrect; it should be 'want to buy'. The sentence needs completion to convey meaning clearly.

× Because there are some experts that they can memorize all the things that they are warned by the years of their having, years of experience they are having and also sometimes they are maybe workers or for for.

✓ Because there are some experts who can memorize all the things they have learned over the years of their experience, and sometimes they may be workers or so.

The sentence has pronoun misuse and awkward phrasing. 'That they' is redundant; use 'who'. 'Warned by the years' is incorrect; should be 'learned over the years'. 'Years of experience they are having' is awkward; use 'years of their experience'. The sentence ends abruptly and needs completion.

× Actually, these days we can make a list from phone because it's really helpful for it, because there are so many online websites to make lists.

✓ Actually, these days we can make a list on the phone because it's really helpful, as there are many online websites to make lists.

The preposition 'from phone' is incorrect; use 'on the phone'. 'Helpful for it' is awkward; just 'helpful' suffices. 'Because' repeated twice is redundant; use 'as' or restructure.