Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, taking a clear shoplifter before I go to shop is significant for me. For example, I always make a list for my daily life so I cannot forget any items.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, it's a significant way to complete my daily work. For example, I often. Separate different workers into different time. I found it helps me completely work.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I suppose that some people don't like to restrict their life because they like to do everything freedomly.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Absolutely. I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more convenient. I can read it anywhere and anytime on my phone. The list on a paper is easier to be loose.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中有词汇使用错误(如'shoplifter'应为'shopping list'),影响了表达的准确性。建议注意词汇的正确使用,并且回答可以更简洁自然,避免重复表达。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go shopping because it helps me remember everything I need.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不够清晰,句子不完整,且缺少连贯的逻辑连接词。建议练习完整句子表达,并使用连接词使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list for my work tasks. For example, I organize different tasks by time, which helps me complete my work efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但词汇使用不准确(如'freedomly'应为'freely'),且句子结构可以更自然。建议注意词汇的正确形式和自然表达。
Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to live freely without restrictions.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答较为完整,但最后一句表达不够自然,建议使用更地道的表达方式。整体可以增加一些连接词使回答更连贯。
Ví dụ: I definitely prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient. I can access it anytime and anywhere, whereas paper lists can easily get lost.
× Yes, taking a clear shoplifter before I go to shop is significant for me.
✓ Yes, taking a clear shopping list before I go shopping is significant for me.
这里'shoplifter'是错误的单词,正确的应该是'shopping list'(购物清单)。另外,'go to shop'应改为'go shopping',因为英语中表示去购物通常用动名词形式。
× I always make a list for my daily life so I cannot forget any items.
✓ I always make a list for my daily life so I do not forget any items.
句中使用了'cannot',但表达习惯上应使用'do not'来表示一般现在时的否定,且更符合语境。
× I often. Separate different workers into different time.
✓ I often separate different work tasks into different times.
原句中断句错误,且'workers'应为'work tasks','different time'应为'different times',以表达将工作任务分配到不同时间段。
× I found it helps me completely work.
✓ I found it helps me complete my work.
'completely'是副词,不能修饰动词'work',应使用动词不定式'complete'来表达完成工作的意思。
× they like to do everything freedomly.
✓ they like to do everything freely.
'freedomly'不是正确的副词形式,正确的副词是'freely',表示自由地。
× The list on a paper is easier to be loose.
✓ The list on paper is easier to be lost.
'on a paper'应改为'on paper',表示在纸上;'loose'是形容词,意思是松的,正确表达应为'be lost',表示容易丢失。