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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, absolutely. Frankly speaking, I don't think my mind is so brilliant that I can memorize everything. Before I go to grocery shop, I will write down everything I want to purchase to help me remind of it.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes, this play as a reminder for me every time. I will plan the whole day at morning and I think it will help me remind my compulsory work very well.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Yes, I found some people who don't like making lists because they don't want to waste time on making lists. They prefer doing something rather than make a list and then doing that because they think it's a type of wasting time.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to make a list on paper because it's more neutral for me, but if I don't have paper and a pen I will choose make a list on my phone because it's easy to carry and find.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点,但语言有些不自然,且存在语法错误,如“help me remind of it”应为“help me remember it”。建议简化表达,避免冗余,同时注意语法准确。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because I find it hard to remember everything I need. Writing it down helps me avoid forgetting important items.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“this play as a reminder”应为“this plays as a reminder”,且表达不够清晰。建议使用更准确的句子结构,并补充具体细节说明效果。

Ví dụ: Yes, I make a to-do list every morning to organize my tasks. It helps me stay focused and ensures I complete all my important work on time.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中重复使用“making lists”,显得冗余,且句子结构不够流畅。建议使用连接词使表达更连贯,并丰富内容。

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time. They prefer to start tasks immediately instead of spending time planning.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但“more neutral for me”表达不够准确。建议使用更贴切的词汇,并注意句子流畅性。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because it feels more personal to me. However, if I don't have paper, I use my phone since it's convenient and easy to access.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Before I go to grocery shop, I will write down everything I want to purchase to help me remind of it.

Before I go to the grocery shop, I will write down everything I want to purchase to help me remember it.

这里 'help me remind of it' 用法错误,应该用动词 'remember' 来表达记住的意思,而不是 'remind'。此外,'grocery shop' 前应加定冠词 'the'。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Before I go to grocery shop, I will write down everything I want to purchase to help me remind of it.

Before I go to the grocery shop, I will write down everything I want to purchase to help me remember it.

短语 'remind of' 用法不当,正确表达应为 'help me remember it',表示帮助记住。

Sentence structure errors

× Yes, this play as a reminder for me every time.

Yes, this plays as a reminder for me every time.

句子缺少动词的第三人称单数形式,'play' 应改为 'plays',以符合主谓一致。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I will plan the whole day at morning and I think it will help me remind my compulsory work very well.

I will plan the whole day in the morning and I think it will help me remember my compulsory work very well.

'at morning' 应改为 'in the morning',这是固定搭配;'help me remind' 用法错误,应为 'help me remember'。

Verb + -ing form

× I will plan the whole day at morning and I think it will help me remind my compulsory work very well.

I will plan the whole day in the morning and I think it will help me remember my compulsory work very well.

'help me remind' 用法错误,应该用 'help me remember',因为 'remind' 通常是提醒别人,而这里是自己记住。

Verb + -ing form

× They prefer doing something rather than make a list and then doing that because they think it's a type of wasting time.

They prefer doing something rather than making a list and then doing that because they think it's a type of wasting time.

'prefer' 后面两个动作应保持形式一致,均用动名词形式,因此 'make' 应改为 'making'。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I prefer to make a list on paper because it's more neutral for me, but if I don't have paper and a pen I will choose make a list on my phone because it's easy to carry and find.

I prefer to make a list on paper because it's more natural for me, but if I don't have paper and a pen I will choose to make a list on my phone because it's easy to carry and find.

'neutral' 用词不当,应为 'natural' 表示更自然;'choose make' 缺少不定式 'to',应为 'choose to make'。

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