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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes I do at least can help me to clean my mind and make sure I got everything I want.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Yes, I usually do make a list. It's worked pretty well because having a list can help me to be more management and organized.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

While they may not see the importance of making a list, or they just want to circle themselves in the things they plan to do, they may want to try something new and unexpected.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

Nowadays I prefer to make it on my phone because they are convenient and I can check it whenever I go. And uh.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然,语法和表达存在错误,建议使用完整句子并明确表达观点,例如说明列清单的具体好处。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 表达中存在语法错误和用词不当,建议使用正确的时态和词汇,并增加连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list for my work, and it works well because it helps me manage my tasks efficiently and stay organized.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,表达含糊且逻辑不够连贯,建议简化句子结构,明确说明原因并使用连接词。

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's unnecessary or they prefer to be spontaneous and flexible with their plans.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且有语法错误,建议使用完整句子,避免口语填充词,并具体说明手机列清单的优点。

Ví dụ: Nowadays, I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can check it anytime and anywhere.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the present participle form

× Yes I do at least can help me to clean my mind and make sure I got everything I want.

Yes, I do. At least it can help me clear my mind and make sure I get everything I want.

原句中缺少逗号分隔,且“can help me to clean my mind”中的“clean”用词不当,应该用“clear my mind”表示“理清思路”。另外,“make sure I got”时态错误,应为一般现在时“make sure I get”,因为描述的是习惯性动作。

Past tense issue

× Yes, I usually do make a list. It's worked pretty well because having a list can help me to be more management and organized.

Yes, I usually make a list. It works pretty well because having a list can help me be more organized and manage better.

“It's worked pretty well”时态错误,应为一般现在时“it works pretty well”,因为描述的是习惯性效果。短语“help me to be more management and organized”中“management”用词错误,应改为形容词“manage better”或“more organized”。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× It's worked pretty well because having a list can help me to be more management and organized.

It works pretty well because having a list can help me be more organized and manage better.

“help me to be more management”中“management”是名词,搭配不当,应使用形容词或动词形式。去掉“to”更自然,直接用“help me be”。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× While they may not see the importance of making a list, or they just want to circle themselves in the things they plan to do, they may want to try something new and unexpected.

While they may not see the importance of making a list, or they just want to limit themselves to the things they plan to do, they may want to try something new and unexpected.

“circle themselves in”用法不正确,表达限制范围应使用“limit themselves to”。

Singular and plural issue

× Nowadays I prefer to make it on my phone because they are convenient and I can check it whenever I go.

Nowadays I prefer to make it on my phone because it is convenient and I can check it whenever I go.

“my phone”是单数,后文却用复数代词“they”,应改为单数代词“it”以保持一致。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

CleanBlank; Pure; Virtuous; Neat
NewRecently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
PrettyAttractive; Quite; Beautify
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