Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
It depends what I will buy because sometimes I have to buy something special that are is not well known. For me it's different from regular integrand. That's why that time I should make a list for shopping because they are not usually remind remind in our mind. That's why I think.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
No, I don't make a list for work because if I have any work my mind always be remind that I have a work that and I should done it within at that time or in this deadline. Like I have the exam on 20 August. That's why I.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people don't like making Lee because they think if they make list every time they would not be able to remind anything and their brain power will decrease and that will that will not be good at all. That's why some people don't need they don't think they need make list.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Hours make list on my phone because every hour I don't get PayPal and pen and I think it's a problem for looking for paper and pen. If we I list in my phone it's can be do any times or anywhere. I don't think too far looking at that.
Do you make a list when you shop?
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Ví dụ: Yes, I sometimes make a list when I shop, especially if I need to buy special items that I don't usually buy. Because these items are not common, I find it helpful to write them down so I don't forget. However, for regular shopping, I usually don't make a list.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
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Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I always remember my tasks and deadlines in my mind. For example, I know I have an exam on 20 August, so I prepare accordingly without writing a list.
Why don't some people like making lists?
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Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they believe that relying on lists all the time might weaken their memory and brain power. Therefore, they prefer to remember things without writing them down.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
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Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, unlike paper and pen which I might not find easily. Making lists on my phone allows me to add or check items anytime and anywhere.
× sometimes I have to buy something special that are is not well known
✓ sometimes I have to buy something special that is not well known
The subject 'something special' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are'. This is a singular and plural agreement issue.
× it's different from regular integrand
✓ it's different from regular ingredients
The word 'integrand' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'ingredients' which is plural. This is a singular and plural issue as the noun form was incorrect.
× because they are not usually remind remind in our mind
✓ because they are not usually remembered in our mind
The verb 'remind' is incorrectly used; the correct past participle 'remembered' should be used here. Also, 'remind remind' is a repetition error. This relates to verb form and singular/plural usage.
× I should make a list for shopping because they are not usually remind remind in our mind
✓ I should make a list for shopping because they are not usually remembered in our mind
The modal verb 'should' is correctly used to express obligation. The issue is with the verb form after 'are not usually', which should be past participle 'remembered' to form the passive voice.
× I should make a list for shopping because they are not usually remind remind in our mind
✓ I should make a list for shopping because they are not usually remembered in our mind
The modal verb 'should' is correctly used to express obligation. The issue is with the verb form after 'are not usually', which should be past participle 'remembered' to form the passive voice.
× if I have any work my mind always be remind that I have a work that and I should done it within at that time or in this deadline
✓ if I have any work, my mind is always reminded that I have work and I should do it within that time or by the deadline
The modal verb 'should' is correctly used, but 'should done' is incorrect; it should be 'should do'. Also, 'my mind always be remind' is incorrect; it should be 'my mind is always reminded'. This is a modal verb and verb form issue.
× I should done it within at that time or in this deadline
✓ I should do it within that time or by the deadline
After modal verb 'should', the base form of the verb is used, not the past tense. So 'done' should be 'do'.
× if I have any work my mind always be remind that I have a work that
✓ if I have any work, my mind is always reminded that I have work
'Work' is uncountable here, so 'a work' is incorrect. Also, 'my mind always be remind' should be 'my mind is always reminded' to agree in number and tense.
× Some people don't like making Lee because they think if they make list every time they would not be able to remind anything
✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think if they make a list every time they would not be able to remember anything
'Making Lee' is incorrect; it should be 'making lists' (plural). Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list'. 'Remind' is incorrectly used; 'remember' is correct here.
× Some people don't need they don't think they need make list
✓ Some people don't think they need to make a list
The phrase 'don't need they don't think' is incorrect and redundant. The correct structure is 'don't think they need to make a list'. Also, 'make list' should be 'make a list'.
× Hours make list on my phone because every hour I don't get PayPal and pen
✓ I make lists on my phone because I don't always have paper and pen
'Hours make list' is incorrect; it should be 'I make lists'. 'Every hour I don't get PayPal and pen' is incorrect; likely intended 'paper and pen'. This is incorrect pronoun and word usage.
× If we I list in my phone it's can be do any times or anywhere
✓ If I list on my phone, it can be done anytime or anywhere
The preposition 'in' should be 'on' when referring to using a phone. Also, 'can be do' should be 'can be done'. 'Any times' should be 'anytime'.
× I don't think too far looking at that
✓ I don't think it's too difficult to look at that
The phrase 'too far looking at that' is incorrect. A better expression is 'too difficult to look at that'. This is an incorrect preposition and phrase usage.