List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity. For example, say "Yes, I do because it helps me find what I need easily and prevents me from forgetting items."

Ví dụ: Yes, I do because it helps me find what I need easily and prevents me from forgetting items when I shop.

Gợi ý: Your answer needs clearer structure and smoother linking. Use linking words like 'especially' and 'also' properly, and correct grammar for better flow. For example, "Yes, I do, especially since I work in the kitchen. Before I start, I check the preparation list, and after finishing, I write it down again."

Ví dụ: Yes, I do, especially since I work in the kitchen. Before I start, I check the preparation list, and after finishing, I write it down again.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and repetitive. Try to give a clear reason with proper sentence structure and avoid repetition. For example, "Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory or simply prefer not to bother."

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory or simply prefer not to bother.

Gợi ý: Your answer has grammar mistakes and is a bit unclear. Use correct verb forms and clearer expressions. For example, "I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me think more clearly than using my phone."

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me think more clearly than using my phone.

× Yes I do, it makes me easier to find what I want to buy and barely forget to buy what I wanted to.

✓ Yes I do, it makes it easier for me to find what I want to buy and to barely forget to buy what I want.

The phrase 'makes me easier' is incorrect; it should be 'makes it easier for me' to correctly express the idea. Also, 'barely forget' is awkward; 'to barely forget' is better, but ideally 'to avoid forgetting' would be clearer. The verb 'wanted' should be 'want' to maintain present tense consistency.

× So I tend.

✓ So I tend to do that.

The sentence 'So I tend.' is incomplete and lacks an object or complement. Adding 'to do that' completes the thought and clarifies the meaning.

× I prefer to make a list when I do shopping.

✓ I prefer to make a list when I go shopping.

The phrase 'do shopping' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'go shopping' when referring to the activity.

× Especially I am working in the kitchen.

✓ Especially when I am working in the kitchen.

The sentence is incomplete and lacks a conjunction to connect it properly. Adding 'when' clarifies the condition.

× So before start working I need to check a preparation list.

✓ So before starting work, I need to check a preparation list.

After 'before', the verb should be in the -ing form ('starting'). Also, 'start working' can be simplified to 'starting work' for naturalness.

× So also I when I finish working I need to write down a preparation list.

✓ Also, when I finish working, I need to write down a preparation list.

The original sentence has incorrect word order and missing commas. Rearranging and adding commas improves clarity and correctness.

× Some people, for example, they have a good memory or and I know some people who are tend to be lazy, they don't.

✓ Some people, for example, have a good memory, and I know some people who tend to be lazy; they don't.

The pronoun 'they' is redundant after 'some people'. Also, 'are tend to be' is incorrect; it should be 'tend to be'. The conjunctions are also corrected for clarity.

× They don't. They don't make a list, a list.

✓ They don't make a list.

The repetition and sentence fragment 'They don't.' is unnecessary and should be removed for clarity.

× I prefer make a list by using a paper because I like to write down the things and makes me more my brain more clear than using a phone, so I prefer to use.

✓ I prefer to make a list using paper because I like to write things down, and it makes my brain clearer than using a phone, so I prefer to use paper.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to make'. 'By using a paper' is incorrect; 'using paper' is correct. 'Makes me more my brain more clear' is ungrammatical; it should be 'it makes my brain clearer'. The sentence ending 'so I prefer to use' is incomplete and needs 'paper' to complete the thought.