List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to make it more concise and natural by avoiding redundancy. For example, instead of saying "I want everything to be listed and so I won't have trouble finding the aisle or thinking about what item that I need to buy," you can say "I make a list to avoid forgetting items and to find them easily in the store." Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me avoid forgetting items and makes it easier to find them in the store.

Gợi ý: Your answer is effective and shows your opinion clearly. To improve, try to use linking words like "so" or "which" to connect your ideas and avoid repeating words like "it" too often. Also, you can use more varied vocabulary such as "sense of achievement" instead of "accomplishment."

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a list for my work, and it works well because crossing out completed tasks gives me a sense of achievement, which motivates me to continue with the next ones.

Gợi ý: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using more precise vocabulary and clearer structure. Instead of "making this," say "making lists." Also, explain why it makes them overwhelmed and what "being in the moment" means. Use linking words like "because" and "so."

Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because it can feel overwhelming, so they prefer to stay spontaneous and enjoy the moment without planning too much.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be more concise and natural. Instead of repeating "I think" and "whenever," try to combine ideas using linking words like "since" or "because." Also, avoid redundancy like "list it down and type it."

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone since it's always with me, making it convenient to quickly add items without any limit.

× I want everything to be listed and so I won't have trouble finding the aisle or thinking about what item that I need to buy.

✓ I want everything to be listed so I won't have trouble finding the aisle or thinking about which items I need to buy.

The phrase 'what item that I need to buy' is incorrect because 'what' and 'that' are both used to introduce relative clauses, causing redundancy. Also, 'item' should be plural 'items' to match the context of multiple things to buy. Use 'which items I need to buy' for clarity and correctness.

× I think some people don't like making this because it makes them overwhelmed and they want to be in the moment.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because it makes them feel overwhelmed and they want to be in the moment.

The pronoun 'this' is vague and unclear; it should be replaced with 'lists' to specify what is being referred to. Also, 'makes them overwhelmed' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'makes them feel overwhelmed' to properly convey the emotional state.