Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I make a list when I'm shopping because I think it can help me remember the things I need to buy.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I make A to do list for my work because I think it can help me to keep track of my tasks haven't completed and I think it definitely works well for me.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think these people prefer a casual lifestyle and they don't want to be controlled by the schedules and they might enjoy in the flexible daily routine.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone or in my notebook because I think its easier to edit items. For example, if I forget something I can quickly add it to my lists.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 你的回答比较自然且直接,但可以增加一些具体细节来丰富内容,比如说明你如何制作购物清单或它带来的好处。
Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me avoid forgetting important items. For instance, I usually categorize items by sections in the supermarket, which makes shopping more efficient.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,建议注意时态和句子结构,同时可以用连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work because it helps me keep track of unfinished tasks. Moreover, it improves my productivity by reminding me of priorities.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法和表达不够准确的问题,建议使用更自然的表达方式,并用连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer a casual lifestyle. They might feel that strict schedules limit their freedom and enjoy having a more flexible daily routine.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 85.0Gợi ý: 回答较好,但可以更具体地说明为什么手机或笔记本更方便,并注意复数形式的使用。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone or in my notebook because it's easier to edit items. For example, if I forget something, I can quickly add it to my list without any hassle.
× I make A to do list for my work because I think it can help me to keep track of my tasks haven't completed and I think it definitely works well for me.
✓ I make a to-do list for my work because I think it can help me keep track of my tasks I haven't completed and I think it definitely works well for me.
这里的错误是“tasks haven't completed”缺少了关系代词“that”或“which”,导致句子结构不完整。应改为“tasks I haven't completed”表示“我还没有完成的任务”。另外,“A to do list”中的“A”应小写为“a”,且“to do list”应加连字符变为“to-do list”。
× they might enjoy in the flexible daily routine.
✓ they might enjoy the flexible daily routine.
动词“enjoy”后面不需要介词“in”,直接加宾语即可。因此应去掉“in”,改为“enjoy the flexible daily routine”。
× I think its easier to edit items.
✓ I think it's easier to edit items.
“its”是物主代词,表示“它的”,而这里应使用“it's”,是“it is”的缩写,表示“它更容易”。这是代词和缩写的混淆错误。