Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I make a list when I am shopping because I think it can helps me to remember all the items I need.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I make a list for my work because I think it can help me to check off the unfinished tasks all the time. Yes, it definitely works well for me.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think these people prefer a casual lifestyle and they don't want to be controlled by the schedules they might enjoy in the flexible daily routine.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone or in my notebook because I think it's easier to edit items. For example, if I forgot something, I can add them in my lists quickly.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点,但有语法错误(如“can helps”应为“can help”),且句子结构较简单。建议注意动词形式的正确使用,并尝试用更自然的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember all the items I need to buy.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较完整,但表达略显重复,且“check off the unfinished tasks all the time”表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达,并避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work because it helps me keep track of tasks I haven't completed yet, and it definitely improves my productivity.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 78.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但句子结构稍显复杂且不够流畅。建议简化句子结构,使用更自然的连接词,使表达更清晰。
Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer a more relaxed lifestyle and don't want to be restricted by strict schedules.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 82.0Gợi ý: 回答内容具体且有例子,但有小的语法错误(如“forgot”应为“forget”,“them”应为“it”),且“in my lists”应为“to my list”。建议注意时态和代词的正确使用。
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone or in my notebook because it's easier to edit items. For example, if I forget something, I can quickly add it to my list.
× Yes, I make a list when I am shopping because I think it can helps me to remember all the items I need.
✓ Yes, I make a list when I am shopping because I think it can help me to remember all the items I need.
动词help在这里是第三人称单数can的后面,助动词can后面动词用原形,不能用helps。应改为help。
× For example, if I forgot something, I can add them in my lists quickly.
✓ For example, if I forgot something, I can add it to my list quickly.
something是单数,代词应使用it而非them;list是单数,前面用my lists不合适,应改为my list。