Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I often make a list when I'm shopping. The reason is that if I don't have a list, I'll forget something that I want to buy, so it is a good measure to shop.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
To be honest, I should make a list when I'm working. The reason is that the make list makes me feel more pleasure. I think it is restrict me.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think the reason is that the list makes people feel more pressure and if they don't finish the task they will feel worried and nervous so that maybe some people they don't like making lists.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I often choose to make a list on my phone compared with the paper, I use my more frequently and I take my to everywhere. So make a list on my phone is more convenient for me and sometimes I add paper I can't find it so but I.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点,但句子结构有些重复,且用词不够自然。建议避免重复表达相同意思,使用更地道的表达方式。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from forgetting important items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答不够清晰,语法错误较多,表达的意思不明确。建议先直接回答问题,然后用具体理由支持,注意语法和用词准确。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a to-do list for work because it helps me stay organized and focused, which improves my productivity.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答内容较好,但句子较长且结构松散。建议使用连接词分割句子,使表达更清晰流畅。
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they feel pressured by the tasks. If they can't complete everything, they may become anxious or stressed.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答语法错误较多,表达不完整,逻辑不清晰。建议先明确表达偏好,再用具体理由支持,注意句子完整和连贯。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always have it with me, which makes it more convenient than using paper lists that I might lose.
× The reason is that the make list makes me feel more pleasure.
✓ The reason is that making a list makes me feel more pleasure.
这里动词短语作主语时,应该用动名词形式'making',而不是动词原形'make'。
× I think it is restrict me.
✓ I think it restricts me.
这里主语是'it',谓语动词应与主语一致,且'restrict'需要第三人称单数形式'restricts','me'是宾语,不需要'it is'结构。
× so that maybe some people they don't like making lists.
✓ so maybe some people don't like making lists.
句中'some people'后不需要再加代词'they',这样会造成重复。
× I use my more frequently and I take my to everywhere.
✓ I use my phone more frequently and I take it everywhere.
'my'是物主代词,后面应接名词,如'phone';'take my to everywhere'中应使用宾格代词'it'代替'phone',且'to everywhere'应改为'everywhere'。
× So make a list on my phone is more convenient for me and sometimes I add paper I can't find it so but I.
✓ So making a list on my phone is more convenient for me, and sometimes I add paper lists but I can't find them.
句子结构混乱,缺少连词和主谓一致,'make'应改为动名词'making','add paper'应具体化为'add paper lists','I can't find it so but I'语序错误,应调整为'I can't find them'。