Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Not always, but I really make one when I go when I have a lot of things to buy, like on weekends when I go to the supermarket to stock up on food and daily necessities.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes I yes I do almost every day. I usually make A to do list with my work test and some other necessities. I think it makes me feel stay organized and know what should be done.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Well, for some people, seeing a lot of unfinished task list may fill them a few more anxious and stressed. It really makes them feel precious but and also some people don't like.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Well, I definitely prefer using my phone to do a list. They are very convenient and some artists. Sir, productivity. For example, unfinished tests can be to the next day.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不够自然,建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用更准确的词汇。
Ví dụ: I don't always make a list, but I do when I have many items to buy, especially on weekends when I shop for groceries and daily essentials.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误,建议使用完整且连贯的句子,明确表达观点,并使用连接词使回答更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a to-do list almost every day. It helps me stay organized and reminds me of the tasks I need to complete.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰且有语法错误,建议理清思路,使用简单句表达原因,并避免无意义的词汇。
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because seeing many unfinished tasks can make them feel anxious and stressed.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中有严重语法和表达错误,建议使用完整句子,清楚表达偏好并给出具体理由和例子。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient and helps me manage tasks efficiently. For example, I can easily move unfinished tasks to the next day.
× I usually make A to do list with my work test and some other necessities.
✓ I usually make a to-do list with my work tasks and some other necessities.
这里的'to do list'应为复合名词'to-do list',且'test'应为复数形式'tasks',因为工作任务通常是多个。单复数错误会影响句子表达的准确性。
× I think it makes me feel stay organized and know what should be done.
✓ I think it makes me feel organized and know what should be done.
动词'make'后面接感官动词结构,后面应接形容词'organized',而不是动词不定式'stay'。错误使用形容词和副词会导致句子结构不正确。
× Well, for some people, seeing a lot of unfinished task list may fill them a few more anxious and stressed.
✓ Well, for some people, seeing a lot of unfinished task lists may make them a bit more anxious and stressed.
'task list'应为复数形式'task lists',因为前面有'a lot of'表示多个。'fill them a few more anxious'表达不正确,应改为'make them a bit more anxious'。
× It really makes them feel precious but and also some people don't like.
✓ It really makes them feel pressured, and also some people don't like it.
'precious'用错,应为'pressured'表示感到压力。句子缺少连接词和宾语,需补充完整。错误的形容词使用和句子结构影响表达。
× Well, I definitely prefer using my phone to do a list. They are very convenient and some artists.
✓ Well, I definitely prefer using my phone to make a list. They are very convenient and sometimes faster.
'do a list'表达不正确,应为'make a list'。'some artists'无意义,推测为'sometimes faster'。单复数和词汇使用错误影响句意。
× For example, unfinished tests can be to the next day.
✓ For example, unfinished tasks can be carried over to the next day.
'tests'应为'tasks',且句子缺少动词'carried over',使句子完整。错误的词汇和句子结构导致表达不清。