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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Sure, I am accustomed to make a list whenever I go shopping, whether in the supermarket or online. Because making a list could help me organize my shopping time and avoid forgetting important items, I usually make a list.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

Certainly, I usually make a list for my working tasks. It helps a lot. For example, it allows me to prioritize my tasks and separate those are very important urgent from those which can wait. It helps reduce my stress and improve my efficiency significantly.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Well from my perspective, I think the reason why some people don't like making it say that they're very self assured and they have good memory. They think that making list is time consuming and prefer organize their daily life mentally.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

Well, to be honest, I prefer using my telephones rather than writing it down on papers because telephone is very convenient and portable. I could carry it everywhere and every time, for example when I'm traveling and I could use the telephone to check.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点,但句子结构有些重复,且部分表达不够地道。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,同时使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before shopping, whether it's at the supermarket or online, because it helps me save time and remember everything I need.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 80.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容较完整,但部分句子语法不够准确,且连接词使用不足。建议注意语法准确性,使用连接词使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often make a list for my work tasks because it helps me prioritize urgent tasks and manage my time better, which reduces stress and improves my efficiency.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议加强句子结构的准确性,并使用连接词使表达更流畅。

Ví dụ: I think some people avoid making lists because they are confident in their memory and find list-making time-consuming, so they prefer to organize their tasks mentally.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了观点,但有些用词不够准确,且句子结构略显重复。建议使用更准确的词汇,并简化句子结构。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and portable, so I can check my list anytime, especially when I'm traveling.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× I am accustomed to make a list whenever I go shopping, whether in the supermarket or online.

I am accustomed to making a list whenever I go shopping, whether in the supermarket or online.

习惯于某事后面应接动名词形式,不能用不定式。这里应使用making而非make。

Incorrect order of adjectives

× separate those are very important urgent from those which can wait.

separate those that are very urgent and important from those which can wait.

形容词顺序错误,通常先放程度副词或强调词,再放形容词。这里应调整为urgent和important的顺序,并补充连接词and。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I think the reason why some people don't like making it say that they're very self assured and they have good memory.

I think the reason why some people don't like making lists is that they're very self-assured and have good memories.

代词使用错误,making后应接复数名词lists而非it;句子结构不完整,需补充is that引导宾语从句;memory应为复数memories。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× They think that making list is time consuming and prefer organize their daily life mentally.

They think that making lists is time-consuming and prefer to organize their daily life mentally.

名词list应为复数lists;time-consuming作为形容词需连字符;动词prefer后应接不定式to organize。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I prefer using my telephones rather than writing it down on papers because telephone is very convenient and portable.

I prefer using my phone rather than writing it down on paper because the phone is very convenient and portable.

telephones应为单数phone;papers应为不可数名词paper;telephone前应加定冠词the;代词it指代不明确,改为the phone更清晰。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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