Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
No, I have a good remember so I can buy everything I need and I sometime I want to try new product.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a clip for my work, especially every day. It helps me stay focused and often my talk more effectively so I can complete everything on time.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
I think they have a good remember or they want to do try new everything.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer make list on my phone because it's convenient, I can check this every time everywhere and I had write on paper.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên cải thiện ngữ pháp và cách sử dụng từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và chính xác hơn. Ngoài ra, hãy tránh lỗi chính tả và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, rõ ràng hơn.
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I have a good memory and can remember everything I need. Sometimes, I like to try new products spontaneously.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Bạn nên sử dụng từ vựng chính xác hơn và cấu trúc câu rõ ràng. Ví dụ, từ 'clip' không phù hợp trong ngữ cảnh này. Hãy dùng từ 'list' và thêm liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list for my work every day. It helps me stay focused and communicate more effectively, so I can complete all my tasks on time.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng và ngữ pháp chính xác hơn. Bạn nên giải thích cụ thể hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'do try new everything'.
Ví dụ: I think some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory or they prefer to try new things spontaneously.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần sử dụng cấu trúc câu đúng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'I prefer make list'. Hãy dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc và rõ ràng hơn.
Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it's convenient. I can check them anytime and anywhere, unlike writing on paper.
× No, I have a good remember so I can buy everything I need and I sometime I want to try new product.
✓ No, I have a good memory so I can buy everything I need and sometimes I want to try new products.
The word 'remember' is a verb, but here a noun is needed, so 'memory' is correct. 'Sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. 'Product' should be plural 'products' because it refers to new items in general.
× Yes, I usually make a clip for my work, especially every day.
✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work, especially every day.
The word 'clip' is incorrect in this context; the intended word is likely 'list'. This is a vocabulary error rather than a grammar problem, but correcting it is necessary for clarity.
× It helps me stay focused and often my talk more effectively so I can complete everything on time.
✓ It helps me stay focused and often helps me talk more effectively so I can complete everything on time.
The phrase 'my talk' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me talk' to maintain subject-verb agreement and correct pronoun use.
× I think they have a good remember or they want to do try new everything.
✓ I think they have a good memory or they want to try new things.
Again, 'remember' should be 'memory' as a noun. 'Do try' is redundant; 'try' alone is sufficient. 'New everything' is incorrect; 'new things' is the proper plural noun phrase.
× I prefer make list on my phone because it's convenient, I can check this every time everywhere and I had write on paper.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's convenient; I can check it anytime, anywhere, and I have written on paper before.
'Prefer make' should be 'prefer to make' to use the infinitive form after 'prefer'. 'List' needs an article 'a'. 'Check this every time everywhere' is awkward; 'check it anytime, anywhere' is more natural. 'I had write' is incorrect; 'I have written' is the correct present perfect tense.