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Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Yes, I make a list before I shop because it helps me remember what I need to buy and keeps me from spending too much money. I usually write things down on paper before I go.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

No, I don't make a list for my work. I prefer to keep track of this in my head. I think make this is too strict and I feel like too more flexible with my work.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Some people don't like making this because it takes too much time. People can remember things without writing down and they prefer to start working on their tasks right now.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I prefer to make a list on paper because I like writing things down. It helps me remember things and I'd like to cross off my lips when I'm done.

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Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答比较自然且内容相关,但可以更简洁,避免重复表达“记住”和“写下来”的意思。建议用更丰富的词汇描述购物清单的好处,并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and avoid unnecessary purchases. Usually, I jot down the items on paper before heading to the store, which makes the shopping process more efficient.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清的问题,影响了自然流畅度。建议使用正确的句型表达观点,并用连接词连接句子,使表达更连贯。

Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to keep track of tasks mentally. I find that making lists feels too rigid, and I like to stay flexible with how I manage my work.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容基本符合要求,但用词不够准确,如“making this”应为“making lists”。建议使用更具体的词汇和连接词,使表达更清晰自然。

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because it can be time-consuming. They believe they can remember tasks without writing them down and prefer to start working immediately.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中出现了明显的错误,如“cross off my lips”应为“cross off my list”。建议注意词汇的准确使用,并用连接词使句子更连贯。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because writing things down helps me remember better. Also, I enjoy crossing off items on my list when I complete them.

Ngữ pháp

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I think make this is too strict and I feel like too more flexible with my work.

I think making this is too strict and I feel like being more flexible with my work.

这里“make this”用法错误,应该用动名词形式“making this”表示“做这件事”;“feel like too more flexible”结构不正确,应该用“feel like being more flexible”表示“感觉更灵活”。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× Some people don't like making this because it takes too much time.

Some people don't like making lists because it takes too much time.

这里“making this”指代不明确,应该用复数名词“making lists”来明确指代“制作清单”。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× People can remember things without writing down and they prefer to start working on their tasks right now.

People can remember things without writing them down and they prefer to start working on their tasks right away.

“writing down”后缺少宾语,应该加上“them”指代“things”;“right now”语境中更合适用“right away”表示“立刻”。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× It helps me remember things and I'd like to cross off my lips when I'm done.

It helps me remember things and I'd like to cross off my list when I'm done.

“cross off my lips”是拼写错误,应为“cross off my list”,表示“划掉我的清单”。

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