Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I do, because I think making a list can help me choose products conveniently in order to save my time.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes I do, I make a list for my study and it helps me improve my mark greatly.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Everyone has their own choices. I think they don't like make lists because they think making a list. Wasted their time.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list on my phone because I take my phone everywhere and I think phone is very convenient. But if I make a list on paper, I always forget it.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点,但句子结构较简单,且有些表达不够自然。建议使用更地道的表达方式,并避免冗余,例如“choose products conveniently”可以改为“shop more efficiently”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me shop more efficiently and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中“make a list for my study”表达不够准确,且缺少连接词使句子显得生硬。建议使用更自然的表达,并用连接词连接句子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my studies, and they really help me improve my grades significantly.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,句子不完整,表达不清晰。建议注意语法,使用完整句子,并用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: I think some people dislike making lists because they believe it wastes their time.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅,同时避免重复“phone”。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me, which is very convenient. On the other hand, I tend to forget paper lists.
× I think they don't like make lists because they think making a list. Wasted their time.
✓ I think they don't like making lists because they think making a list wastes their time.
动词后面接动名词时,应该用动词的-ing形式。这里'don't like'后面应该接'making',而不是'make'。另外,句子中'wasted'应改为'wastes',因为主语是单数形式'making a list',需要用第三人称单数形式。