List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中时态使用不准确，句子结构不够清晰，表达有些重复。建议注意时态一致性，简洁表达原因，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me plan ahead and control my spending effectively.

Gợi ý: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不清晰。建议完整回答问题，使用正确的语法，并具体说明列清单如何帮助管理工作。

Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my work because I have many assignments. They help me manage my time and complete tasks efficiently.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不清楚，词汇使用不当，逻辑不连贯。建议用更准确的词汇表达观点，并用连接词使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's unnecessary, and they prefer to rely on their own memory and self-control.

Gợi ý: 回答基本表达了观点，但时态错误和表达不够自然。建议注意时态一致，使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can easily carry it while shopping, which is very convenient for me to check items.

× Certainly I always make a list when I was shop because I need to make a plan before I need to go shopping and they are also have some advantages about to control the cost.

✓ Certainly I always make a list when I shop because I need to make a plan before I go shopping and there are also some advantages to controlling the cost.

句中使用了过去时态 'was shop'，但描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时 'shop'。此外，'they are also have' 结构错误，应改为 'there are also'。最后，'about to control' 应改为 'to controlling' 以符合动名词用法。

× Actually I have a lot of assignments need to do during my school life. So there are a lot of subjective.

✓ Actually I have a lot of assignments to do during my school life. So there are a lot of subjects.

'subjective' 是形容词，句中应使用名词复数 'subjects'。

× So there are a lot of subjective. I need to control the time and.

✓ So there are a lot of subjects. I need to manage my time well.

句子不完整，'I need to control the time and.' 缺少后续内容，需补充完整表达。

× Well, some of them maybe think of making this experiment and not useful.

✓ Well, some of them may think that making lists is not useful.

'maybe' 应为情态动词 'may be'，且 'this experiment' 用词不当，应改为 'making lists'。此外，句子结构不完整，需补充谓语。

× However they have a best control on themselves.

✓ However, they have better control over themselves.

'a best control' 用法错误，应为比较级 'better control'。介词应为 'over' 而非 'on'。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can take it when I was shopping.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I can take it when I am shopping.

'when I was shopping' 描述现在或习惯动作，应使用一般现在时 'when I am shopping'。