Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because it can remind me what I need to buy and reduce me from buying unnecessary things.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I will make a list when I was working and it reminds me what I need to do and it's helpful.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Because they think that this may reduce their life freedom and they think making a list is a waste of time.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to make a list of paper. If I make a list on my phone, I will always check my phones that hurt my eyes and on a paper made me feel comfortable.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了基本意思,但句子结构有些不自然,且有语法错误。建议使用更自然的表达方式,并避免重复。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 时态使用不正确,句子结构较简单且缺少连贯性。建议使用正确时态,并用连接词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I make a list when I work because it reminds me of my tasks, and I find it very helpful.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中重复使用了“they think”,显得冗余。建议使用连接词和更丰富的词汇来表达观点。
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it limits their freedom and consider it a waste of time.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱,语法错误较多,表达不够清晰。建议简化句子,使用正确的语法和连接词。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on paper because using my phone too much strains my eyes, and paper feels more comfortable to me.
× Yes, I will make a list when I was working and it reminds me what I need to do and it's helpful.
✓ Yes, I made a list when I was working and it reminded me what I needed to do and it was helpful.
这里时态使用不正确。句子中描述的是过去的情况,应该使用过去时态。'will make' 应改为 'made','reminds' 改为 'reminded','need' 改为 'needed','is' 改为 'was'。建议根据时间背景使用正确的时态。
× I prefer to make a list of paper.
✓ I prefer to make a list on paper.
介词使用错误。英语中表达“在纸上”应使用介词 'on',而不是 'of'。因此应改为 'make a list on paper'。