List— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了观点，但语言不够自然，句子结构不完整，且有语法错误。建议简化句子，避免断句，使用连贯的表达方式，并且注意时态和介词的正确使用。

Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go. This helps me organize the items I need and saves time while shopping.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，句子不够流畅。建议使用简单明了的句子，注意动词形式和连词的使用，使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I make lists for my school work. It helps me organize my tasks clearly and manage my time efficiently.

Gợi ý: 回答中词汇使用不当（如“defenders”，“plunder”），句子结构混乱，影响理解。建议使用更准确的词汇，简化句子结构，表达清晰的观点。

Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find it hard to organize tasks in order and complete them step by step.

Gợi ý: 回答中有词汇错误（如“form”应为“phone”），句子表达不够流畅。建议注意词汇准确性，简化句子结构，使表达更自然。

Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and saves time compared to writing on paper.

× The reason is that I can. Better consider the categories I need to buy and also save the time for me to picking up.

✓ The reason is that I can better consider the categories I need to buy and also save time when picking up.

原句中“Better consider...”前面断句不完整，导致句子结构混乱。应将其与前句合并，形成完整句子。同时“save the time for me to picking up”中“to picking up”用法错误，应改为“when picking up”或“in picking up”，使表达更自然。

× The reason is that I can. Better consider the categories I need to buy and also save the time for me to picking up.

✓ The reason is that I can better consider the categories I need to buy and also save time when picking up.

“save the time for me to picking up”中“for me to picking up”搭配不当，动词不定式后不应接动名词，应改为“when picking up”表示时间状语，更符合英语习惯。

× The reason is that making a plan for my school work can always provide me with a more clear mind and therefore I can better to plan my time and also done all those work.

✓ The reason is that making a plan for my school work can always provide me with a clearer mind, and therefore I can better plan my time and also do all that work.

“a more clear mind”应为“a clearer mind”，比较级用法错误；“can better to plan”中“to”多余，应去掉；“done all those work”中“done”应为动词原形“do”，且“work”不可数，前面用“those”不合适，应改为“that work”。

× The reason is that making a plan for my school work can always provide me with a more clear mind and therefore I can better to plan my time and also done all those work.

✓ The reason is that making a plan for my school work can always provide me with a clearer mind, and therefore I can better plan my time and also do all that work.

“those work”中“work”是不可数名词，不能用复数指示代词“those”，应改为“that work”。

× I think it was quite effective because it is efficient for me to do follow.

✓ I think it was quite effective because it is efficient for me to follow it.

“to do follow”结构不正确，动词“follow”不需要“do”辅助，且缺少宾语，应补充“it”使句子完整。

× Well, those kind of defenders will hold various views and reasons for they do not prefer to make some plans, but basically I would suppose that maybe they will find it is very difficult to plunder things in a sequence and also done them.

✓ Well, those kinds of people will hold various views and reasons why they do not prefer to make plans, but basically I suppose that maybe they find it very difficult to put things in sequence and also do them.

“those kind of defenders”应为“those kinds of people”或“that kind of people”，“defenders”用词不当；“for they do not prefer”应为“why they do not prefer”；“plunder things”用词错误，应为“put things”；“done them”应为“do them”。

× Well, those kind of defenders will hold various views and reasons for they do not prefer to make some plans, but basically I would suppose that maybe they will find it is very difficult to plunder things in a sequence and also done them.

✓ Well, those kinds of people will hold various views and reasons why they do not prefer to make plans, but basically I suppose that maybe they find it very difficult to put things in sequence and also do them.

“some plans”在此处不合适，通常说“make plans”不加“some”；“those kind of defenders”中“those kind of”应为“those kinds of”或“that kind of”。

× Well, I would say I am keen on making some plan on my form.

✓ Well, I would say I am keen on making some plans on my phone.

“some plan”应为复数“some plans”；“form”应为“phone”，可能是拼写错误。

× Well, I would say I am keen on making some plan on my form.

✓ Well, I would say I am keen on making some plans on my phone.

“keen on”后接动名词或名词，正确；“on my form”应为“on my phone”，且“on”用法正确。

× The reason is that nowadays the technology is quite developed so it is more convenient and less time consuming to plan.

✓ The reason is that nowadays technology is quite developed, so it is more convenient and less time-consuming to plan.

“the technology”不需要定冠词，应为“technology”；“time consuming”作为形容词应连写为“time-consuming”。

× The school works and also all sorts of activities online without paper writing.

✓ School work and all sorts of activities are done online without writing on paper.

“school works”应为不可数名词“school work”；句子缺少谓语动词，应补充“are done”；“without paper writing”表达不自然，应改为“without writing on paper”。