Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. This help me remember everything I need and save time. When I found an item I will take it off and move on to the next aisle. This way I can shop more efficiently and won't forget.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually create a list for my work because it helps me schedule all my texts efficiently. Making a list also help me avoid forgetting important things so I can prioritize my work better and manage my time more efficiently. This method really improves my productivity.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
In my opinion, I think making a list can make some people feel a lot of pressure and stressful. Maybe they like to have a casual time management and.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer to create a list on my cell phone because that I can check it anytime and anywhere I want and I seldom bring a paper when I going outside.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 你的回答基本清晰,但存在语法错误,如"This help me"应为"This helps me"。建议注意动词单复数一致,同时可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember everything I need and saves time. When I find an item, I take it off the list and move on to the next aisle. This way, I can shop more efficiently and avoid forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如"help me"应为"helps me",且"texts"用词不准确,建议使用更合适的词汇。可以增加连接词使句子更连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually create a list for my work because it helps me organize all my tasks efficiently. Moreover, making a list helps me avoid forgetting important things, so I can prioritize my work better and manage my time effectively. This method really improves my productivity.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不够自然,"stressful"应为形容词,建议改为"feel stressed"。句子应完整,避免断句。建议丰富内容并使用连接词。
Ví dụ: In my opinion, making a list can make some people feel a lot of pressure and stress because they prefer a more casual approach to managing their time. Therefore, they might avoid lists to keep their schedule flexible.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如"because that I can"应为"because I can","when I going"应为"when I go"。建议简化句子结构,使用连接词使表达更自然。
Ví dụ: I prefer to create a list on my cell phone because I can check it anytime and anywhere I want. Also, I seldom carry paper when I go outside, so using my phone is more convenient.
× This help me remember everything I need and save time.
✓ This helps me remember everything I need and save time.
主语是单数的"This",谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"helps"。
× When I found an item I will take it off and move on to the next aisle.
✓ When I find an item I will take it off and move on to the next aisle.
句子中描述的是习惯动作,时间应使用一般现在时,故将"found"改为"find"。
× Making a list also help me avoid forgetting important things so I can prioritize my work better and manage my time more efficiently.
✓ Making a list also helps me avoid forgetting important things so I can prioritize my work better and manage my time more efficiently.
主语是单数的动名词短语"Making a list",谓语动词应使用第三人称单数形式"helps"。
× In my opinion, I think making a list can make some people feel a lot of pressure and stressful.
✓ In my opinion, I think making a list can make some people feel a lot of pressure and stress.
"stressful"是形容词,表示使人感到压力的;此处应使用名词"stress"表示感受到的压力。
× Maybe they like to have a casual time management and.
✓ Maybe they like to have a casual approach to time management.
句子结构不完整,"and"后无内容,且表达不清晰,需补充完整并调整表达。
× I prefer to create a list on my cell phone because that I can check it anytime and anywhere I want and I seldom bring a paper when I going outside.
✓ I prefer to create a list on my cell phone because I can check it anytime and anywhere I want, and I seldom bring paper when I go outside.
"because that"用法错误,应去掉"that";"bring a paper"中"paper"不可数,去掉冠词;"when I going"应为"when I go",动词形式错误。