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Part 1

Giám khảo

Do you make a list when you shop?

Thí sinh

Making last is very important step for free shopping because it helps me to stick to only buying the items that I need.

Giám khảo

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Thí sinh

I don't make a list for my work at work at my office work because it does not work and usually my work is getting distracted with sudden onset of matters. So no need for me to do any kind of lists for the work.

Giám khảo

Why don't some people like making lists?

Thí sinh

Making lasts for everything takes time, and not every work needs making a list. Sometimes I go with my brain, whatever priorities are there from yesterday and the last week.

Giám khảo

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Thí sinh

I'm fine with both ways. If my husband is the one, for example, to go shopping, then I prefer writing it on a paper and submitting it to him.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Do you make a list when you shop?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: Try to use correct vocabulary and grammar, for example, say 'making a list' instead of 'making last'. Also, keep your answer concise and clear, and avoid redundancy. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me focus on buying only the items I need, which saves time and money.

Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: Avoid repeating words and improve sentence structure for clarity. Use linking words to explain your reasons clearly. For example, say 'I don't make lists for my office work because unexpected tasks often arise, making lists less effective.'

Ví dụ: No, I don't make lists for my office work because unexpected tasks often come up, so lists don't help me stay organized.

Why don't some people like making lists?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: Use correct vocabulary and grammar, such as 'making lists' instead of 'making lasts'. Also, provide clearer reasons with linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time, and they prefer to rely on their memory to manage priorities from previous days or weeks.

Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear but could be improved by adding linking words and a topic sentence to make it more natural and structured.

Ví dụ: I don't mind making lists either on paper or on my phone. However, if my husband goes shopping, I prefer to write the list on paper and give it to him for convenience.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× Making last is very important step for free shopping because it helps me to stick to only buying the items that I need.

Making a list is a very important step for free shopping because it helps me to stick to only buying the items that I need.

The phrase 'Making last' is incorrect; it should be 'Making a list'. The word 'last' is a typo or incorrect word choice here. Also, the article 'a' is missing before 'very important step'. The correct phrase is 'Making a list is a very important step'. This correction improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

Article errors

× Making last is very important step for free shopping because it helps me to stick to only buying the items that I need.

Making a list is a very important step for free shopping because it helps me to stick to only buying the items that I need.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before 'very important step'. In English, singular countable nouns require an article. Adding 'a' before 'very important step' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

Verb + -ing form

× I don't make a list for my work at work at my office work because it does not work and usually my work is getting distracted with sudden onset of matters.

I don't make a list for my work at my office because it does not work and usually my work gets distracted by sudden onset of matters.

The phrase 'work at work at my office work' is repetitive and awkward; it should be simplified to 'work at my office'. Also, 'my work is getting distracted' is incorrect; 'work' as a subject is not typically 'getting distracted'. Instead, 'my work gets distracted' or better 'I get distracted' is more appropriate. Additionally, 'with sudden onset of matters' should be 'by sudden onset of matters' to use the correct preposition.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I don't make a list for my work at work at my office work because it does not work and usually my work is getting distracted with sudden onset of matters.

I don't make a list for my work at my office because it does not work and usually my work gets distracted by sudden onset of matters.

The preposition 'with' is incorrectly used after 'distracted'. The correct preposition is 'by' when indicating the cause of distraction. Therefore, 'distracted with sudden onset of matters' should be 'distracted by sudden onset of matters'.

Verb + -ing form

× So no need for me to do any kind of lists for the work.

So there is no need for me to make any kind of list for the work.

The phrase 'do any kind of lists' is incorrect. The verb 'make' is used with 'list' rather than 'do'. Also, 'lists' should be singular 'list' because 'any kind of' is followed by a singular noun. Additionally, the sentence lacks a subject; adding 'there is' makes it complete.

Singular and plural issue

× Sometimes I go with my brain, whatever priorities are there from yesterday and the last week.

Sometimes I go with my brain, whatever priorities were there from yesterday and last week.

The phrase 'the last week' is incorrect; it should be 'last week' without 'the'. Also, the tense should be past 'were' to match 'yesterday and last week'. This correction aligns the sentence with proper plural usage and time reference.

Incorrect use of prepositions

× Sometimes I go with my brain, whatever priorities are there from yesterday and the last week.

Sometimes I go with my brain, whatever priorities were there from yesterday and last week.

The preposition 'from' is not appropriate here when referring to time periods like 'yesterday and last week'. It is better to omit 'from' and say 'priorities were there yesterday and last week'.

Incorrect use of the definite article

× Sometimes I go with my brain, whatever priorities are there from yesterday and the last week.

Sometimes I go with my brain, whatever priorities were there from yesterday and last week.

The definite article 'the' before 'last week' is unnecessary and incorrect. 'Last week' is a fixed time expression and does not require 'the'.

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