Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping. It helps me stay organize it and ensures that I don't forget any important items. For example when I shop for groceries, having at least saved my time. Have any preference and.
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organize this and focus it. For example, by listing tests and order of biology, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting importance.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer a more spontaneous approach to managing the text. For instance, they might feel that this limit they create ATV or ART.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
I prefer making a list on phone on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible. For example, I can easily add or delete items and anytime without worrying about losing the paper.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp như 'stay organize it' và câu không hoàn chỉnh như 'Have any preference and'. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích chi tiết với ví dụ cụ thể và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important items. For example, when I shop for groceries, having a list saves me time and prevents me from buying unnecessary things.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ, ví dụ 'stay organize this' không đúng và câu cuối thiếu rõ nghĩa. Hãy sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, giải thích chi tiết hơn và dùng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focused. For example, by listing my biology tests in order, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important tasks.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ không phù hợp như 'managing the text' và cụm từ không rõ nghĩa 'limit they create ATV or ART'. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp, dùng từ vựng phù hợp và giải thích rõ lý do với ví dụ cụ thể.
Ví dụ: Some people don't like making lists because they find them too restrictive and prefer to be more spontaneous. For instance, they might feel that lists limit their creativity or flexibility in managing tasks.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn khá tốt nhưng có lỗi lặp từ 'on phone on my phone'. Hãy sửa lỗi nhỏ này và sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc hơn. Ngoài ra, bạn có thể thêm một vài chi tiết cụ thể hơn để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
Ví dụ: I prefer making a list on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible. For example, I can easily add or delete items anytime without worrying about losing a paper list.
× It helps me stay organize it and ensures that I don't forget any important items.
✓ It helps me stay organized and ensures that I don't forget any important items.
The verb 'stay' should be followed by an adjective or a past participle to describe the state. 'Organize' is a verb, but here the correct form is the past participle 'organized' to indicate the state of being arranged or in order.
× For example when I shop for groceries, having at least saved my time.
✓ For example, when I shop for groceries, it saves me time.
The original sentence is incomplete and lacks a clear subject and verb. The phrase 'having at least saved my time' is incorrect and unclear. The corrected sentence provides a clear subject 'it' and verb 'saves' to express the intended meaning.
× Have any preference and.
✓ I have my preferences.
The original sentence is incomplete and does not form a proper sentence. It lacks a subject and verb. The correction provides a complete sentence expressing the intended meaning.
× Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organize this and focus it.
✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focus.
Similar to the previous 'stay organize' error, 'stay' should be followed by 'organized' (past participle) to describe the state. Also, 'focus it' is incorrect; 'focus' is an intransitive verb here and does not take an object, so 'focus' alone is correct.
× For example, by listing tests and order of biology, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting importance.
✓ For example, by listing tests and the order of biology topics, I can manage my time more efficiently and avoid forgetting important things.
The phrase 'order of biology' is unclear and incomplete; adding 'topics' clarifies meaning. 'Avoid forgetting importance' is incorrect; 'importance' is a noun and cannot be forgotten. The correct phrase is 'avoid forgetting important things' or 'important items'.
× Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer a more spontaneous approach to managing the text.
✓ Some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer a more spontaneous approach to managing tasks.
The word 'text' is incorrect in this context; the intended meaning is likely 'tasks' or 'work'. 'Text' refers to written content, which does not fit here.
× For instance, they might feel that this limit they create ATV or ART.
✓ For instance, they might feel that these limits restrict their creativity or freedom.
The original sentence is unclear and contains nonsensical phrases 'limit they create ATV or ART'. The correction clarifies the intended meaning that limits created by lists may restrict creativity or freedom.
× I prefer making a list on phone on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible.
✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because it's more convenient and accessible.
The phrase 'on phone on my phone' is redundant and incorrect. The correct prepositional phrase is 'on my phone' to indicate the device used.
× For example, I can easily add or delete items and anytime without worrying about losing the paper.
✓ For example, I can easily add or delete items anytime without worrying about losing the paper.
The adverb 'anytime' is misplaced after 'and'. Removing 'and' and placing 'anytime' after 'items' improves sentence flow and correctness.