Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you make a list when you shop?
Thí sinh
Actually not, because I'm a casual person, so I'm not very willing to make a list. I think that's limits my freedom, you know?
Giám khảo
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Thí sinh
Actually not. I don't make a list for my work because maybe I'm not very willing to do such things because I think that is a waste of my time. I think maybe if I do a list for my work, I don't think it will work.
Giám khảo
Why don't some people like making lists?
Thí sinh
Oh, that's a good question. Which is really proper to me because I'm the kind of person who is really not willing to make a list because I think a list will limit our freedom. And if we make a list, we will end up feeling stressed and less productive. So I don't think I want to make a list.
Giám khảo
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Thí sinh
Maybe I'll prefer using the phone to make a list instead of using paper, because I think using the phone is more convenient than paper. Nowadays. The Internet and mobile phones are really advanced, so I think using a phone is a better choice.
Do you make a list when you shop?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答时语法有误,如"that's limits"应为"that limits"。表达较为简单,缺少具体细节和连贯的连接词。建议使用更准确的语法结构,并增加具体原因和连接词,使回答更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: No, I usually don't make a list when I shop because I prefer to be spontaneous. I feel that making a list limits my freedom, so I like to decide what to buy on the spot.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答重复且表达不够清晰,使用了多次"I think"和"maybe",显得不自信。建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并提供具体理由或例子来支持观点。
Ví dụ: No, I don't usually make lists for my work because I find them time-consuming. Instead, I prefer to prioritize tasks mentally, which works better for me.
Why don't some people like making lists?
Điểm: 65.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误,如"Which is really proper to me"不通顺。内容重复且缺少多样化表达。建议改进句子结构,避免重复,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Some people dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their freedom. Moreover, following a strict list can cause stress and reduce creativity, leading to lower productivity.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
Điểm: 75.0Gợi ý: 回答较为自然,但句子断裂("Nowadays.")影响流畅性。建议合并句子,使用连接词,并提供更具体的理由。
Ví dụ: I prefer making lists on my phone rather than on paper because it's more convenient and I can easily edit or delete items. With advanced technology, using a phone is definitely a better choice nowadays.
× I think that's limits my freedom, you know?
✓ I think that limits my freedom, you know?
这里的主语是单数的"that",谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式"limits",而不是"that's limits"。"that's"是"that is"的缩写,后面不能直接跟动词。应去掉"'s",使主谓一致。
× I think that is a waste of my time.
✓ I think that it is a waste of my time.
句中"that"指代前文内容,作为主语时应加上代词"it",使句子结构完整,主谓一致。
× I think maybe if I do a list for my work, I don't think it will work.
✓ I think maybe if I make a list for my work, it won't work.
"do a list"用法不当,正确表达应为"make a list"。此外,"I don't think it will work"中"I don't think"重复,简化为"it won't work"更自然。
× Which is really proper to me because I'm the kind of person who is really not willing to make a list because I think a list will limit our freedom.
✓ This is really proper to me because I'm the kind of person who is really not willing to make a list because I think a list will limit our freedom.
句首"Which"用法错误,应使用指示代词"This"来指代前面的话题,使句子通顺。
× Maybe I'll prefer using the phone to make a list instead of using paper, because I think using the phone is more convenient than paper.
✓ Maybe I prefer using the phone to make a list instead of using paper, because I think using the phone is more convenient than paper.
"I'll prefer"时态和语气不合适,表达习惯应为一般现在时"I prefer",表示偏好。
× Nowadays. The Internet and mobile phones are really advanced, so I think using a phone is a better choice.
✓ Nowadays, the Internet and mobile phones are really advanced, so I think using a phone is a better choice.
"Nowadays."不应单独成句,应与后句合并,中间用逗号连接,保持句子完整。